gun needs fixing then it would be epic.
Nice, but the lines coming off the bullet look lame. Either don't include as many or include them at all.
Remove them entirely.
The gun wouldn't be smoking so much after the bullet has traveled only a few inches.
I think that whatever it is that is breaking isn't breaking realistically.It looks like it's about to explode.
I know, I just liked how it looked. This really wasn't supposed to be anything special, I just thought it looked pretty neat.
thats a long bullet