things about this video:
-you used pics in wrong places. it says SWORD GIVER above her head, you know.
-there is NOTHING in there about what dungeons look like, how to get through them, WHERE THEY ARE, and more.
-don't tell people what to buy. they can decide what they want, and you could just tell them what things do.
-there is nothing about where to find dyes or monsters of specific kinds
all those.