Author Topic: Bones4's first portrait attempt.  (Read 6685 times)

I won't tell you who it is. Hopefully you can tell. I'll finish it soon.



Comments and constructive criticism appreciated.

Looks really good. Only problem is that the right eye is lopsided a bit, so she looks a bit "off". :cookieMonster:

Also I'm gonna say it's Jessica Alba.

whoa... i thought i was looking at a black & white photo, nice! and it looks like Sarah Palin a little...


Great job dude, her face much like the real thing, but less shiny.

Her right eyebrow (My right, her left) could use some work. Also, what medium are you using?


The right eye looks kinda funky. I would suggest sizing it down. It looks a tad bit bigger than the Left. It's quite noticeable to me as an "Artist"

The ruler tells me different. It's not the eye, but the shadows around the eye.

The ruler tells me different. It's not the eye, but the shadows around the eye.
Yeah, the eye itself is fine. I believe it is the eyebrow and the sharpness of the nose on the right side that's throwing you off. The position and rotation of her face might also throw you off.

I also just realized. When you look at her. Her left eye is opened wider than her right. It almost makes her look half Asian. Some more C.C is that her right eye is lower or it appears that way. And also, very nice job. I give you my applause.


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Yeah, the eye itself is fine. I believe it is the eyebrow and the sharpness of the nose on the right side that's throwing you off. The position and rotation of her face might also throw you off.

Yeah, I think I can see what you're talking about.

Some more C.C is that her right eye is lower or it appears that way.

Again, eye shadows. The eyes are aligned.

Again, eye shadows. The eyes are aligned.

Doesn't appear to me that way.

Doesn't appear to me that way.
Well you need to stop failing at art then.

Looked at a different angel. And I see it now.