Author Topic: John0515's ZDL App *Image Heavy*  (Read 1726 times)

This is a zombie survival build. Hope you like it!
Please rate x/10 and tell me anything that could be fixed.

Pics:
Overview


Left:Spectator Room Middle:Control Room Right: Base


Base at level 1


Base level 2


Base level 3


Base with wall


Spectators room (With teleporter)


Spectators room2 (Where teleporter leads)


Control room


Zombie controls


Upgrade controls


Other computers for show


Zombie spawn room


Flag thats on the wall


Save:http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=aead70943b5d6c06d2db6fb9a8902bda

Hope you like it!







« Last Edit: December 14, 2008, 06:37:00 PM by John0515 »

Not very good. Seems very generic for a zombie build. Try adding something unique to it.

3/10

Looks like a cross between PressMe's and Knaz's, but worse.

Very empty and plain.

Look I'l put this to you strate, Its dull, its empty, your events are like the ones of someone in there first week of playing this game and it it a total copy of "Defend Your Castle!"

First add alot more to it, second make it look nicer and better built, THEN learn to do good events and make it work well, try looking at the ones in "Defend Your Castle!" or "ZDL Shooting Range" (My one)

Relay I'd say just smash it and start again... My rating 3/10 too
« Last Edit: December 14, 2008, 07:36:31 PM by Melonking906 »


Before trying to be persuasive, use correct grammar.

Hay don't blame me blame my spell check, and the fact I was born with dyslexia..... So there is not much I can do about it :D....


dyslexia
OnTopic (sort of): I think it is Dislexia
OffTopic: Just like George Lopez!

This is a crappy cheap knock-off of Hugum's "Defend Your Castle"

I see that you where trying to make a good build, but this is your first build and it is a tough lesson to learn
just don't post your first builds

Very empty and plain.
Sums this build up nicely.

Why did you make all that space and put nothing in it?

Looks like a cross between PressMe's and Knaz's, but worse.

Ew, mine is 300% better than this.