Better?

Close, no cigar though.
Take out the seriously excess moles, the clown shoes, the miscolored eyes, the black hair, seriously dark mustache, make skin a few tones darker and take out the beard.
So for the next few pages this is a draw what you think Gen. Nick looks like thread?
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Be back in a bit, I got homework to do. Feel free to keep posting. I'll keep watch.