Grim, you need to use more of these:
I dont kow what they are called, but it looks like that.
Just use this more, it makes it ALOT easier for people to read.
I also hope you know how to use them, I am just giving you an example. They are ment to space out different subjects to make it easier to read.
EDIT: Paragraphs :P Thats what they are called... I hope.