RockHouse WIP

[Diargon]

I have just started this build and will be my first build that i put work into . Yes I know thats pathetic for a ID of 3387. I hope it is good. I'm going to add a 2nd level secrets under the house and secrets in the house. Constructive critCIAm please */10

Heres a pic http://s429.photobucket.com/albums/qq20/diargon/?action=view&current=Rockhouse.jpg

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[MrCookie]

I don't like it.

[Diargon]

D:

[Sirrus]

Props for attempting some terraining, but the house is pretty bad.

[Khorde]

the coloring makes it look like barf.

[Diargon]

What colors should i use?
What should the house look like?

[*Magick* Mage]

Quoted Comments

I have just started this build and will be my first build that i put work into . Yes I know thats pathetic for a ID of 3387.

-Just as a comment, it doesn't matter what your ID is when building. Sure, it feels kinda cool to have a low ID to some people (I would know, my ID is 671), but in the relativity of building it hardly mans anything. (The only real point you could bring up is experience, but everybody learns and works at a different. Many parts play into this)

Props for attempting some terraining, but the house is pretty bad.

-I mostly agree with this. You tried some new things, but the house isn't the greatest.


Ratings

Exterior
Clear Effort - 8/10
Constructional design and detail - 1.5/10 (A bit boxy, no real detail, common look)
Terraining  - 6.5/10 (Nice job. This is a fairly difficult skill to master.)
Color Usage - 8/10 (Although, it looks Christmas-y with those colors. I suggest a change, unless it is supposed to be displayed as such.)
Overall -  4.1/10 (Finding the average of all the above, then changing it to 10's)

Interior
N/A (No pictures of interior)


Overview
I wish luck to you on your house. Its not yet finished and we haven' seen the inside, so theirs no official score. The exterior gets  a 4.1/10. Good luck. 
 

[Sensei]

This fails in biblical proportions.

[Drake]

This fails in biblical proportions.

Indeed :D

[Monty]

This is merely a heap of vomit, extruded to give height.

[Otis Da HousKat]

The rock cliff is spammy and doesn't even look like a rock cliff. The style and color of the house are horrible; puke green and completely solid walls. What the hell is that blue thing supposed to be?

[Falcondude]

You need to add a bit more effort to the rock wall. It's okay if a brick occasionally sticks under the top plate, but most of the ramps should leave you a 1x1 space to build the top out to.

The house is a tiny box. Ever tried to proportion your own house? A typical room would be 7 or 8 bricks high. That'll give you some space for windows, too. All those little details that you add make it look less like a box and more like a house.

On a positive note, I like the "water" you put on the cliffs.

[Sirrus]

You need to add a bit more effort to the rock wall. It's okay if a brick occasionally sticks under the top plate, but most of the ramps should leave you a 1x1 space to build the top out to.

And this guy is like the Bono of rock cliffs.

[Sappy]

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[Daedalus]

I don't like it.

Neither do I

This is merely a heap of vomit, extruded to give height.

QFT

the coloring makes it look like barf.

Also QFT

I give this build a 1/10.