Yes, it does. Without proper critique I can't fix many mistakes. If that's what you call criticism then you are doing a terrible job of it.
You see, the way that things work, are like this:
Pi: Side view looks odd.
Tesla inspects the side view for oddities, maybe even compares it to a sketch of a human.
Tesla still sees nothing wrong.
Tesla: Elaborate
Pi elaborates
Tesla looks at the areas that were mentioned. Does Tesla agree with Pi after closer inspection?
If yes, Tesla fixes said areas.
If not, Tesla tells Pi that he prefers the way it looks, and does not want to change it.
And that, is the correct process for C/C. (Unless there is something you wish to add. Then, apply lines 6-11 to this situation.)