Author Topic: Gun Fire, and Not a Chance. Currently at chap 4  (Read 6338 times)

Heres a little friendly tip.
Learn how to loving spell.
Its damnit,not dammit.
you're a douche,you know that right?



See, it's usually "Dammit".

Heres a little friendly tip.
Learn how to loving spell.
you're a douche,you know that right?


This sucks.

Dammit /sarcasm




Chapter 1: Don't Mess With Rookie.

A small village in Maine.

"Hey, uh sarge, what are you doing in there?!?!"
"I'm kinda occupied. I'm busy failing-"
"Sarge!!!! The whole US Army just called an order to exterminate this squad!!!"




« Last Edit: May 11, 2009, 05:34:35 PM by Tomcat »

so I am going to do the same thing you did.


-gayragesnip-
How lovely. All I did was saying "No." nothing more nothing less.
By the way; welcome to the internet, where anything is possible.

How lovely. All I did was saying "No." nothing more nothing less.
By the way; welcome to the internet, where anything is possible.

Could you be a little nicer. Thats it.

Nicer than just a no?
I didn't inculde anywhere a "forget" or "stuff" nor loveual things as "gay, lesbian, ass, titts, snake e.t.c".

Accept it or ignore it. My god stop acting like a child, it will get you nowhere than where you just are right now, and to be serious, you are in a very low position.

and to be serious, you are in a very low position.

lower in real life.

Explains everything.

It's really quite quite bad. Your choice of words ("LEET") and overuse of punctuation (?!?!?) detract from the cut'n'copy story.

Nicer than just a no?
I didn't inculde anywhere a "forget" or "stuff" nor loveual things as "gay, lesbian, ass, titts, snake e.t.c".

Accept it or ignore it. My god stop acting like a child, it will get you nowhere than where you just are right now, and to be serious, you are in a very low position.

I mean, be nicer to me on the forums. I already have enough bitches bothering me.

I mean, be nicer to me on the forums. I already have enough bitches bothering me.

I wonder why.