Wizard Park

[Wizard]

Intro

One day, while you are strolling through the countryside of Anamia, looking for a pwn tree to cut down, you see a strange cliff. Actually, you see two cliffs, and a winding path stretching through them. Curiosity takes ahold and you decide to explore this new path, after all, maybe you'll find a fabled pwn tree.

After walking for an hour, you are tired and exhausted, if you don't find something soon, you're turning back. Just as you've decided to give up, you round a corner to a strange sight. An arch hangs over the cliff exit proclaiming: Wizard Parks in bold letters. You decide to take a further look, after all, this place looks kind of nice.

Wizard Park

Wizard park is a landscape build I adapted from a section that I made of an RPG. Yes Krypton, that one. It features: Trees, a river, a pathway, lots of landscape, even a small graveyard!

In the future I plan to add:
-Differently coloured terrain, to add diversity to the ground
-One or more houses
-More space
-A lake
-More types of trees
-More ramp-based land
-Flowers

The Build So Far

A view from a tree showing the entrance sign, cemetary, and a tree turned into a signpost to direct people. It also shows some of the path:


A view from one side, looking down on the other:


The other side:


Looking down the river, you can see the path and a small footbridge:


A pic showing the two types of trees so far:


A nice view showing a lot:


A bridge:


Other Info

11353 Bricks Total

Okay, Here goes.

I made 5 bricks in the Bridge.

I helped with the leaves on the Apple tree's

I made the apple's on the tree's

I made 7 bricks in the Landscape

I made the River

I made the Waterfall

I made one rose on the Graveyards



I think that's it..

This build is still a WIP, I will change it.

If there's anything you'd like me to screenshot, I will.

Feel free to rate x/10

That's it

-Wizard

[Ad Bot]

[radamein]

Two words Holy stuff

[Wizard]

In a good way?

[Niliscro]

Eh, I'd give it maybe a 6 or 7/10.
It isn't bad, but there really isn't anything special going on.
The trees are ok, however, the path needs a little work; add some variety by using some 2x2 rounds or
something, to me it just looks odd.  Also, the waterfall needs some more...water. Not using the emitter necessarily,
but maybe using some trans blue and making cliffs around it to tie it all together.

[DarthVolga]

The only thing that had potential was the trees.

[Wizard]

Remember, guys, that this build is a WIP and isn't nearly done. I'm not defending myself, in fact, I'm taking your advice, just saying to keep that in mind.

[Chaos Master]

Taking into account that this is a WIP it is pretty good.

What is there is deccent, and I hope you add more.

[Blockoman]

Here are my suggestions:

1. Add better flowers. Also, they are the same size as the apples. That's not good.
2. Add some variation in the stone path. Add some stray stones, so it isn't too square, make two studs on top of each other every now and then, and hammer a stone or two every few feet.

Otherwise, 8.4/10.

[Grumpy]

2/10

[Fusion]

Grumpy, isn't that rating a bit harsh? I actually kind of like this. The only problems are that some things look too perfect.

[Grumpy]

no not at all,  the pathway is 1x1 rounds next to eachother with dupe trees :/

[Fusion]

The thing is that you didn't give any constructive feedback.

[Wizard]

no not at all,  the pathway is 1x1 rounds next to eachother with dupe trees :/

He's kind of right, I'm certainly changing the pathway, it sucks. The trees are going to have more varieties too.

And hell, it's supposed to look pretty.


Honestly though. Don't lower rating because it looks ''duped''. After all, it's the product that matters, not the way in which I made it.

[Grumpy]

change the basework of the trees, it's exactly the same for all the trees (i think)

[Sandvich]

no not at all,  the pathway is 1x1 rounds next to eachother with dupe trees :/

Good job, you make art turn into a piece of stuff right before my eyes :o