My Tdm (WIP)

[Justin K.]

Here is my tdm so far.  You can rate x/10Please do not flame(regulith)

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[Regulith]

Seems decent, but it looks too empty. I suggest adding more things in the middle.

[Sandvich]

4/10
meh..

[Justin K.]

Meh....???

[Burple]

It's a decent start. Just be sure to Add stuff in the middle or the ratings next time you post it will go............ ppppppllllllooooooooooooppppp p!

[haloguymitch]

add the remains of buildings in the middle. that will make it look like a war went on before

[Justin K.]

Hmmmm I'll think about that.  What is was going fo in the middle was a big gray building and then another big hill with sniper places and whatnot.

[A GUY]

Here is my tdm so far.  You can rate x/10Please do not flame(regulith)

You knew it was coming. 


5/10

[Regulith]

You knew it was coming. 

It's because I pointed out everything that was wrong with his "epic picture" topic, so he assumed I'd "flame" him here as well. I wasn't even that mean about it.

[gangsteratack]

looks too empty

[Justin K.]

Its a WIP A.K.A Work In Progress

[Justin K.]

add the remains of buildings in the middle. that will make it look like a war went on before

How's this?  Did this in a 1/2 an hour.  I see there not the greates pics, sorry if you think that. :P

[Littledude]

How's this?  Did this in a 1/2 an hour.  I see there not the greates pics, sorry if you think that. :P

The middle building could be a darker shade of grey, it's pretty good though.

[Dy mar]

I love simple dms, I cant seem to do it though! Great

[Regulith]

How's this?  Did this in a 1/2 an hour.  I see there not the greates pics, sorry if you think that. :P

Too...square.

Needs to be actual remains, not a box house shooting flames.