Author Topic: [WIP] My TGB application (update: NEW EXTERIOR!)  (Read 2277 times)

This is my TGB-application and I know, this is not a space build!
(two weeks ago my computer crashed, so I lost all my saves, except for this one because it still was on my usb-stick)
This is a WIP, so I'm still working on it.
Feel free to rate
Also tell me what to change/add/delete

Now for the pics:

front view


side view


back view


main hall (with bridge)



reception (outside)


reception (inside)


2nd hall (hall to the rooms and bathrooms) (old pic, now had lights)



single rooms (all rooms are the same except for the luxury suits)

The television and the computer are evented, so the screens change color when you press a key(or remote)


bathroom




The receptions and the hotel rooms have lights!

What's done?   done   working on   not done   

main hall
reception
second hall
single rooms
bathrooms
hang-out
front garden
kitchen with restaurant
public toilets
luxury suits
roof
bar

Some people might have noticed that there are green doors (the bathroom-doors) in the 2nd hall.
why?
because the people can see whether it is closed or open
(you can close it from the inside, but a admin can come in every-time)


Yes I used props and no, I'm not going to tell you where to get them

« Last Edit: June 15, 2009, 10:47:21 AM by chilmans »

Props are from the Yayfun forums.

Oh, and I like it, but I'm not going to rate it untill you finish.

You need 3 yes's.

Oh, and I like it, but I'm not going to rate it untill you finish.
Also like to say:
-that there will be cannons on the roof for protecting the hotel quests
-that the restaurant will be on the back of the hotel, but I still have to add the baseplate for it
-that I used my own colorset (thanks to trueno for a few colors)
-that you will be able to download the save when I'm done

« Last Edit: June 08, 2009, 10:49:01 AM by chilmans »

deleted this post (was too old)
« Last Edit: June 10, 2009, 12:00:38 PM by chilmans »


I Dont Like the Exterior. It Looks Lame

Pretty good, but the checkered look seems a little overdone in places, and to bright.
There could be a little more detail on the exterior (patios, more shape, etc.) but overall I say well done.  :cookieMonster:

I Dont Like the Exterior. It Looks Lame
You say that like you aren't

And don't auto-shift.


I Dont Like the Exterior. It Looks Lame
There could be a little more detail on the exterior (patios, more shape, etc.) but overall I say well done.  :cookieMonster:
I know but the exterior is not done. I will add some windows on the roof
Pretty good, but the checkered look seems a little overdone in places, and to bright.
Any suggestions I could improve that?

I know but the exterior is not done. I will add some windows on the roof
Windows are great, believe me, but what you need is exterior textureing, pillers adjustant to the wall, divide the colors into a sensable non-hippy way. Right now the brown walls and sometimes a window coming out is no good. Tip : Try creating a different colors around the windows.
Any suggestions I could improve that?
Try creating a new design for the floor, it's not that hard.

Otherwise I love the interior. (Except the bed needs a bigger mattress) and it is quite good.

Also like to say:
-that there will be cannons on the roof for protecting the hotel quests

What kind of hotel needs cannons on the roof?

What kind of hotel needs cannons on the roof?

BL HOTELS INC.

What kind of hotel needs cannons on the roof?
Forgot to say that I will create a dm-extension of the hotel
Now I'm just working on the hotel itself

Windows are great, believe me, but what you need is exterior textureing, pillers adjustant to the wall, divide the colors into a sensable non-hippy way.
I will create the some pillars on the walls and try using some other colors (I'm not good at mixing colors on 1 wall)

Except the bed needs a bigger mattress
I'm unfortunately not going to change that (because I first have to make the restaurant/public toilets/bar now)
« Last Edit: June 11, 2009, 05:07:33 AM by chilmans »

Hi guys,

I've got a preview of the new exterior (still working on it) that will come:


Also got a preview of the new floor-texture in the restaurant:


The reason I posted a new post is because this post is actually just a bump