First Attempt at a Wolf (Loling)

[StarHawk]

So I started to draw cartoonish wolves a few weeks back and after some practice this is my first decent one. Please comment.

You can rate x/10 if you want, but please say why you like/dislike it, and don't just say it sucks because the point of criticism is so that I can improve where needed.

EDIT: The neck is sucky because I was mostly focusing on the face, so just ignore that part :|

UPDATE: I drew my second one! Check it out at http://forum.blockland.us/index.php?topic=73330.0

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[Xoax]

It's neck is a bit long, it should gradually curve right near the end.

It's cute though. It just makes me go ":3"

[Regulith]

<3

[Lalam24]

That's pretty good, I like the proportioning :O

Bad part: front of the neck, super spikey stuff, what the forget?

[StarHawk]

front of the neck, super spikey stuff, what the forget?

It's neck is a bit long, it should gradually curve right near the end.

I agree with both of you. I was mostly focusing on facial features in this drawing and I kinda rushed through the neck. I'll pay more attention to it in later drawings.

EDIT: Could use some more feedback guys.

[Osak]

It's very impressive.

[Robo]

I like it, the neck is a weee bit long, But that doesn't hurt it in my eyes.

[Super Yoshi Bro]

That is amazing Star :D

[BountyHunter007]

Looks better than what you showed me on my phone xD

Looks nice =D

9.8/10

[Meekl]

It just makes me go ":3"

*gasp* me too!

[oromis]

i love this. Great job on facial expressions.

[Ryuu]

Thats hawt.

[Hired gun]

Wish I could draw like this. EPIC WIN.

[Menen]

Noice

[Masterlegodude]

Wish I could draw like this. EPIC WIN.

Same

And good job on the drawing, Star