Can you help me fix this?

[|Shadow]

His eyes need to be more the same shape/size.

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Legs too far apart
Eyes are different sizes
Eyes look stoned, not looking at fairy
Head too small/narrow
Body too wide
Eyebrows at wrong angle, change expression to stoned/drunk
Shield is doing some kind of impossible bend, doesn't look like an actual object
You've completely outlines his forward arm so it doesn't look connected to his body
Belt is too narrow
Belt is too low
Belt does not cut into his tunic at all, emphasizing the "fat link" problem

Shading is good, line quality is decent (except some hairy lines on hat).  Try looking at the negative space (the background that is cut out by your figure) to figure out what is wrong.  Also try looking at your drawing in a mirror or upside down.

[Spiderpig]

Legs too far apart
Eyes are different sizes
Eyes look stoned, not looking at fairy
Head too small/narrow
Body too wide
Eyebrows at wrong angle, change expression to stoned/drunk
Shield is doing some kind of impossible bend, doesn't look like an actual object
You've completely outlines his forward arm so it doesn't look connected to his body
Belt is too narrow
Belt is too low
Belt does not cut into his tunic at all, emphasizing the "fat link" problem

Shading is good, line quality is decent (except some hairy lines on hat).  Try looking at the negative space (the background that is cut out by your figure) to figure out what is wrong.  Also try looking at your drawing in a mirror or upside down.

Wow cool thanks! Im working on it now.

[Regulith]

I think the problem with his eyes is that you made Navi to low. She's higher up in the picture, so Link is looking at her. In yours, she's lower, so it's harder for you to get his eyes to look right because you don't have a good reference point.

[Spiderpig]

I think the problem with his eyes is that you made Navi to low. She's higher up in the picture, so Link is looking at her. In yours, she's lower, so it's harder for you to get his eyes to look right because you don't have a good reference point.

Yeah, I could try to move her :|