What are you tracing? It doesn't make sense that you would go from awful to perfectly acceptable in twenty-or-so minutes.
Nothing.
The first one was a total doodle =P
Tryin'a get the feel for drawing this kinda stuff.
Also maybe it's just because I've been awake for 25 hours.
Khorde, I like Worm.
He's a nice guy.
Also my mom told me I have quite-the-high chance of getting FL Studio XXL now =P
So I'm pretty hyper.
Edit: Screw the above. Actually, I remember I started drawing that when I read your "gay" comment and got pissed.
So I guess I literally did spill my emotions out onto that :o
In fact, as proof, I'll go back and show you all of my undo's. (If you wish.)