Author Topic: Re: Max4344 Gas [RB](was a BA app but now a RB app) app  (Read 3337 times)





This also my frst Build it was made in March
Please rate this build 10/10
Also updated for the new JVS doors 2
also built when i was a noob
« Last Edit: August 10, 2009, 02:34:33 PM by Max4344 »

...No.
First builds =/= Clan Applications
Also, why would people rate this 10/10..

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It's alright. 4/10.



Bump now its an app for a clan lets hope i get in this clan


1/10, Sucks exterior, Sucks interior, Sucks Pwnterior, Blah Blah Blah

1/10, Sucks exterior, Sucks interior, Sucks Pwnterior, Blah Blah Blah
i made a cafe in a server i was epic i just want a save of it

1/10 and I am in a good mood


Hmm....
The usage of bricks on it is..interesting, but doesn't show much aparent detail on the main exterior. If the bricks were in a pattern or something of sorts maybe...but no... It's not all on a baseplate or even smaller plates and the fence could be done a bit more creativly. The colors don't make much sense, and it could use a bit more detail. The sign confuses me. It seems to be made out of randomly stacked bricks? The interior is lacked and not much detail. Also, asking to give you a 10/10 gets you -0.2. Not much, but it could mean life or death. Try working on some of these points or considering the points I brought up, if you plan to app again.

Overall....2.8/13. I'm going to go with no....if my word counts at this point, since I've only been in for an hour. :P

Quite sorry, mate. Best wishes on your next builds.

Hmm....
The usage of bricks on it is..interesting, but doesn't show much aparent detail on the main exterior. If the bricks were in a pattern or something of sorts maybe...but no... It's not all on a baseplate or even smaller plates and the fence could be done a bit more creativly. The colors don't make much sense, and it could use a bit more detail. The sign confuses me. It seems to be made out of randomly stacked bricks? The interior is lacked and not much detail. Also, asking to give you a 10/10 gets you -0.2. Not much, but it could mean life or death. Try working on some of these points or considering the points I brought up, if you plan to app again.

Overall....2.8/13. I'm going to go with no....if my word counts at this point, since I've only been in for an hour. :P

Quite sorry, mate. Best wishes on your next builds.
i have an updated build of it but i dont have it i build it on a server i PM the server host and maybe ill have it

i have an updated build of it but i dont have it i build it on a server i PM the server host and maybe ill have it
One of the requirements to get into [RB] is proper grammar. I suggest you pay attention in English class, and/or type out your thoughts throughly....

Bump now its an app for a clan lets hope i get in this clan
Holy stuff a 2 month bump!  Dude, no.