Author Topic: Zombies in the Bluzone** [[**DEAD**]]  (Read 44813 times)

Zombies in the **Bluzone character information

Player name: Bruno Müller

What are your character's personality traits?(Explain, in approximately a paragraph, your character's personality and mentality, and on why they possesses such a personality and mentality): Bruno is a self-contained, mysterious man. He rarely ever tells about himself. He is barely aggressive, but can fight well when needed to. Because of his training, he has developed the athletic ability to carry himself and his teammates through a particularly rough mission. Also, he is ready to take a bullet for anyone who needs it.

What is your character's broad backstory?(Please write approximately a paragraph concerning the key features of your character's backstory - What he/she did before the infection, what happened to them in the infection, how they got to Hillside Terrace): Before the attack, Bruno was a Secret Service agent. On 15.5.1991 he was taken to a small shelter, where he and one Isabelle Anselm talked. She told him nothing about what was going on, she merely gave him an M16, and told him to go find survivors. Before he knew it, he was on a helicopter ride above what seemed to be the remains of a town. What seemed to be people were staggering across the streets, with no definite purpose. When he landed, he expected a little more information, but the only things they gave him were a map and some extra ammo.

A picture of your character(If you cannot get a picture of your character or it is inappropriate or frowned upon by the admins, it will either not be placed up or staged by another person.)






What is your character's place of residence?(Where do they live?): A small bunker near to the Secret Services HQ.

What is your character's DOB?(When where they born?): 19.1.1973*

What is your character's occupation?(What is their current job?): Secret Service Agent


Has your character ever gotten blackmarked before the infection?(Have they ever broken the law before the infection? Did they rob a house? Assault a woman?): Yes, before he was recruited he was a drug dealer. The recruiters made a deal, he came with them or they reported him to the police.

~WhatevaGuy. It is tiny so as not to distract you from the submission.


*This is the European way of writing out the date. Note that 19.1.1973 becomes 1.19.1973, so just keep that in mind.

Géza Kerekes
Accepted
Good detail and a great read. Speak to me if you wish to have a military character.

Nikolai Putin
EPIC WIN
Need I say more?

Casey Reed
Accepted
Very nice. I like your photograph and how you play off your character in the roleplay. Its pretty cool.

Tim "Prnce" White
Denied
Incorrect biography layout and seems irrelevant.

Coin "Gemini" Dutra
Denied
Bad layout and this character is already dead.

Alec "Techie" Chao
Denied
Unrealistic and very brief.

Jack Peterson
Accepted
Good detail and a great picture. I can see decent reflection onto this ingame, which is nice.

Colin "Flare" Xari
Accepted
Good use of dates and traits. I'd like you to town down the pyromaniac stuff in game, though.

Skyra Nesgos.

Stabbing 5 gang members.
Chocking 5 gang members.
Snapping 10 gang members neck's.
Shooting 9 gang memebrs plus the 1 leader.

Denied
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Donny "Rocket" Franco
Denied
Bad layout and a lack of detail.

Sean Terratium Stethar
Accepted
Great biography. Please contact me if you wish to create a military character.

C.M.O. Alice Matthews

THIS WAS HER REVENGE
Accepted
Very good. I like the reflection and summary.

Bruno Müller
Denied
Much too brief and lacks detail.


Congratulations to NicktheSushi, Barnabas and Irishbandit on a great biography. I'll be hosting the building server as of now. I want to get nosebleed done ;)

I thought i would put my character up and this is my Third Version i've made.
Name: Katherine "RedEye" Mitchell

What are your character's personality traits?

Katherine is one of the Worlds Lead Brains that know all about Weaponry,Vehicles and all kinds the Military Has.
She knows her ways around everything the Army throws at her.Like Runner she wouldn't leave a man behind at all costs And she Refuses to tell anyone about Her SPEC-OP Training in the Army.

What is your character's broad backstory?

Katherine "RedEye" Mitchell was born 14 June 1971 in Australia,Darwin.Her Huge Brain Passed every single Quiz and State Quiz at school. Her Father isn't Known by anyone but her Mother and her mother is alive today and her cordinates are Unknown.

At the age of 14, She was robbed by Runner's Gang on a Exchange Student trip to Russia, St.Petersburg and just happened to be robbed of most of her funds to get home.On the 14 July 1986 she recovered enough funds to go back to Australia and go onto University.(Because of her brain she passed High School 4 years before the average Student.)

At the age of 16, she passed everything that prepares her for all of the Weaponry,Vehicles ETC. No one knows why she study these or how she learnt them so fast but it caught the Army's Attention and she was FORCEFULLY Put  into the army.She knew she must have attracted officials for the damn put in the Army forcefully thing.

At the age of 18, Her Training was complete and she was ready for anything.On 4 June 1989 She was put into Squad Raven and sent on the most dangerous missions in the World.She once took on an Entire Division in a mansion controlled by unknown forces. For this she earned the Rank Lt and the nickname "RedEye" for her talent with explosives and Sniper Rifles.

At the age of 21,She was sent on a mission at Hillside Terrace and Eliminate any Survivors.She of course was Double-crossed by the Military and made a run for a safe area.She Found a nice House Tore off everything that had the TRUE identity of herself and Put on some spare Civvies Clothing she had and her Armor and quickly found Runner.Runner didn't Recognize Katherine and she With no where else to go Followed and help the Survivors.RedEye Disappeared and Katherine was born again as a Rebel.

A picture of your character

Most of her Military Photos were Taken but she managed to save this Photo.



This is her photo of the damn Take out the Division of Unknown Hostiles Mission

What is your character's current place of residence?

The Bar But sometime seen leading men to the SafeZones outta HillSide Terrace

What is your characters DOB?

Katherine was born on 14 June 1971.

What is your characters current occupation?

Katherine is a Medic,Demo,Sharpshooter and Armor maker for the Survivors.

Has your character ever gotten blackmark before the infection?

Yes,She Deserted the Military at the Age of 21 a few months before the Mission at Hillside Terrace.The MISSION was just a Cover Story by the Army to make people think it was a Accident.

Also she killed many Soliders x 50 and Infiltrated and Destroyed bases x 5.

By Lt Joshua (BLID 8851)

« Last Edit: September 14, 2009, 07:41:05 AM by A million souls »

She was robbed by Runner on a Exchange Student trip to Russia, St.Petersburg and just happened to be robbed of most of her funds to get home. On the 14 July 1985 she recovered enough funds to go back to Australia

Rob was moved into an orphanage. He lived there until he was 14 in 1985.

Robbert did not assault/rob Katherine. Do not make false facts. How could she of been robbed the same year and get the funds back in the same year? She went to Russia in 1985 and was robbed in 1985 but got the funds back in 1985 and returned to Australia in 1985. What?

1985 and returned to Australia in 1985. What?

Fixed up... A bit...


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Did you accept flare?

Quote from: IceBlue
Colin "Flare" Xari
Accepted
Good use of dates and traits. I'd like you to town down the pyromaniac stuff in game, though.

Yup.
Nice one.

~WhatevaGuy



Good use of dates and traits. I'd like you to town down the pyromaniac stuff in game, though.
But he's a pyroMANIAC 

and hes just working on stuff

I edited mine a little. Though I don't think it matters still not going to make it I bet.

I edited mine a little. Though I don't think it matters still not going to make it I bet.

Still won't be accepted unless it is re-submitted. Any earlier biographies as apposed to the review will not be viewed again. If you re-submit with minor changes, there is a low chance it will be accepted.

Runner didn't Recognize Katherine

Because they never met. I would like to emphasise this more; Do not put Runner or any other characters into your biography without decent consent.



Wait, wait Ice is Knaz?
-pats- We're all a little slow sometimes.