Author Topic: NWB application- street line (Read 1384 times)

qwerg · July 22, 2009, 10:12:53 PM

hello, this is my first app for a clan and i think that this was decent enough to use, the thing that inspired me to app for this clan was their museum, i went to their server to see it and as i went through the exhibits i thought "wow, it would be awesome to build or help with something like this" so this is my street line, heres a full shot of it:

a more closer view of the house:

a inside hallway pic:

the (small) study:

bathroom:

bedroom:

heres a coffee shop, i kinda rushed on this one so it isnt that nice:

the inside:

i hope you enjoy my app

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DarthVolga · July 22, 2009, 10:16:23 PM

Sorry bud, but I dont think that would cut it.

Not a bad build though

qwerg · July 22, 2009, 10:20:14 PM

oh, well im glad you enjoyed what you could

Destroyer · July 22, 2009, 11:58:14 PM

Ok, lets see.

While I do think think that it is an ok build, I don't think that it is quite ready for NWB. Some areas look rushed (as you said). There are also some very spammy areas.

It was a good first try, but sorry, I will have to say No.

qwerg · July 23, 2009, 12:33:07 AM

Quote from: Destroyer on July 22, 2009, 11:58:14 PM

Ok, lets see.

While I do think think that it is an ok build, I don't think that it is quite ready for NWB. Some areas look rushed (as you said). There are also some very spammy areas.

It was a good first try, but sorry, I will have to say No.

okay, thank you for taking the time to look at it

zoneark · July 23, 2009, 12:51:00 AM

DarthVolga · July 23, 2009, 12:52:44 AM

Quote from: zoneark on July 23, 2009, 12:51:00 AM

No.

Any reasoning behind that?

Krystal · July 23, 2009, 01:36:45 AM

Oasis · July 23, 2009, 04:25:46 AM

It's more decent and well built then my first app... *shudder*

Crazy Salt · July 23, 2009, 08:13:14 AM

chilmans · July 23, 2009, 10:37:32 AM

roof?

Burple · July 23, 2009, 10:54:49 AM

It isn't bad, but like Destroyer said, it is spammy in places. Maybe you should make another one only bigger and less spammy.

phflack · July 23, 2009, 11:00:31 AM

Quote from: Destroyer on July 22, 2009, 11:58:14 PM

Ok, lets see.

While I do think think that it is an ok build, I don't think that it is quite ready for NWB. Some areas look rushed (as you said). There are also some very spammy areas.

It was a good first try, but sorry, I will have to say No.

wait, what spam? i only see semi spam in detail

Destroyer · July 23, 2009, 11:30:29 AM

Quote from: phflack on July 23, 2009, 11:00:31 AM

wait, what spam? i only see semi spam in detail

Most of the spam is the ceiling itself, it is made of many 1x? bricks.

Camera · July 23, 2009, 12:23:32 PM

nah, I'm seeing 1x16s

It's nice, but need moar bricks