Author Topic: My [PAD] App (WWII Style Build) (Read 1503 times)

Burple · August 05, 2009, 02:22:11 PM

My [Pad] App

Alright, so I have been a pal to Doom_Dragon for a long time and now he makes a clan and in order to still keep my place I had to make a App. The theme of the app is a WWII style build. I got the idea from that scene at the end of Saving Private Ryan, when they are battling on the bridge. Anyways here are the pictures.

Sky View

Low View

Me On Bridge

Bridge Detail

Trench+Tunnel Under Road

Spawn Place

Turret

Feel free to rate x/10. Constructive criticism is aloud.

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.::Taboo::. · August 05, 2009, 02:40:12 PM

The build itself is good, but it looms way too heavily duplicated, and a bit empty in some spots.

7/10.

suburb · August 05, 2009, 02:55:22 PM

Post this on the site burple http://pnzerclan.webs.com/

Burple · August 05, 2009, 06:05:45 PM

Quote from: .::Taboo::. on August 05, 2009, 02:40:12 PM

but it looms way too heavily duplicated

Yea, but my duplicator is busted, and yes I updated it. But if I duplicate like 150 bricks or more, the Blockland application quits. So no, none of it is duplicated.

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bit empty in some spots.

Suggestions? Near the river it may have seemed empty, but there used to be sandbags and I figured that would have been to much sandbags. What would you suggest?

.::Taboo::. · August 05, 2009, 06:47:05 PM

War debris, like building chunks and burning remains of vehicles.
And corpses if you can get that down.

Burple · August 05, 2009, 07:34:31 PM

Quote from: .::Taboo::. on August 05, 2009, 06:47:05 PM

War debris, like building chunks and burning remains of vehicles.
And corpses if you can get that down.

Ill Try.

Syntho · August 06, 2009, 04:33:28 AM

That bridge isn't detailed.

Burple · August 06, 2009, 10:13:13 AM

Quote from: Syntho on August 06, 2009, 04:33:28 AM

That bridge isn't detailed.

I only said that because it was a close-up. Anyways, I think it's detailed enough. I'd like to see you do a better small bridge like that.

Syntho · August 06, 2009, 05:41:25 PM

Ok I will.
Edit: Here you go.

This bridge is small enough to fit a small army.

Burple · August 06, 2009, 08:17:20 PM

Quote from: Syntho on August 06, 2009, 05:41:25 PM

Ok I will.
Edit: Here you go.

This bridge is small enough to fit a small army.

Sad sad. To much 1X1. Besides. It's a war tdm so it can't look all pretty.

Camera · August 06, 2009, 08:22:05 PM

Empty, like the box in my closet!

Brickman · August 06, 2009, 09:25:46 PM

Quote from: Burple on August 06, 2009, 08:17:20 PM

Sad sad. To much 1X1. Besides. It's a war tdm so it can't look all pretty.

Don't loving quote images like that.

And anyways, that's a horrible excuse. Everything can be detailed.

Syntho · August 06, 2009, 11:53:58 PM

Yay Brickman is on my side!

Rocketttdog · August 06, 2009, 11:55:38 PM

I cant be detailed.

Burple · August 07, 2009, 09:43:18 AM

Ok jess. It's just an app. I'm not going to change it now. But ok yours does have a little more detail. Big deal.