Author Topic: Hospital (My BiT APP) (Read 1033 times)

Audax · August 11, 2009, 07:29:14 PM

This is a hospital I had built for my BiT APP.

Entrance

Service Desk (Left Elevator,Right Waiting Room)

Working Elevator Inside.Made with Events.

Top Floor,Hole in the wall made after clicking the wall tiles.(Door is Locked)

Hospital Beds(After crawling through hole in wall)

Doctor's Private Office.With waiting chairs, plant in corner.

Behind desk.Glass of water,Keyboard+PC,Miniture Plant

Rate x/10 I know I'm not a very good builder I just started.

Also, sorry for page stretch.

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Smokesta · August 11, 2009, 07:51:36 PM

The Ceiling is a little low to the floor what if a basketball player had broke his leg and had to be taken to your hospital?

sir dooble · August 11, 2009, 07:51:54 PM

No offence to yourself, but this is kind of bad.

There's no exterior design to it, nothing special on the inside, and you used the exact same colour for pretty much the whole thing. Also, in picture 3, there's no flooring. It's just the Slate Floor.

Im going to guess that you're new to Blockland, and it's not too bad for a beginners build, but you're going to have to spruce up your builds a bit.
Check out some servers, and look around. Get a feel for building, by seeing other peoples builds, and seeing what exactly makes builds look nice.

Fjeld · August 11, 2009, 07:52:59 PM

Terrible there is not base floor its boxy.

Audax · August 11, 2009, 08:12:08 PM

Quote from: sir dooble on August 11, 2009, 07:51:54 PM

No offence to yourself, but this is kind of bad.

There's no exterior design to it, nothing special on the inside, and you used the exact same colour for pretty much the whole thing. Also, in picture 3, there's no flooring. It's just the Slate Floor.

Im going to guess that you're new to Blockland, and it's not too bad for a beginners build, but you're going to have to spruce up your builds a bit.
Check out some servers, and look around. Get a feel for building, by seeing other peoples builds, and seeing what exactly makes builds look nice.

Nothing taken. I'm not new to Blockland, I havn't been on in 6 months due to my PC breaking.I am new to building though.But thanks for the tips.

phflack · August 14, 2009, 08:56:38 AM

ooh, load it and type /clearspambricks with the script enabled (put on baseplate)

Burple · August 14, 2009, 09:54:52 AM

To boxy

Syntho · August 14, 2009, 06:01:45 PM

I don't know if I'm allowed to vote, but I say NO

Pros:
It has some events, at least you took the effort to do that.
Cons:
The build isn't good at all, it has no Baseplate for one, some of it is spam, and even more of it sucks.
The events are easily created and can be made in at least 5 seconds.

Overall
The build and events need work. Maybe try experimenting and get something unique that has never been created before. Good luck.