Metroid: Arm Cannon (Getting somewhere, kinda)

[prnceoprsia]

This is my first model that I made in Milkshape. I couldn't save it becuase I didn't buy Milkshape, so instead I Downloaded Google sketchup.

Please give me Constuctive critCIAm, I am looking to Improve!
EDIT: I just Tried Using google sketchup, I will have an updated model pic up soon
EDITx2: I Found The Sound From Metroid prime... Just incase Whoever needs it has it.
-Link has been removed becuase I am Working on model more-

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[MtnDew]

Less stacks on your cylinders please.

[Space Guy]

MASSIVE TEXT DESKTOP IS HUGE

Add some kind of animations. It'd be cool to have a mode-switching cannon. (Power Beam, Missiles, whatever)

[prnceoprsia]

Ok, I just need to watch a little Tutorial on how to make ramps in sketch up, then i will post a new pic
 Edit: I figured out the ramp thing on my own. Here is the pic...

It still needs a lot of work though. Also, Mntdew, Could you export this for me When I  finish please?

[AlphaicX]

9 PEOPLE ARE HANGING OUT IN ESKAPE COVE 1 RIGHT NOW, AND WANT YOU TO VISIT! GO NOW!

 

On-topic: In that recent picture, you use way too many polys. Try a 12-sided polygon instead. (Click on the polygon tool then type 12S and hit enter. Works with most numbers.)

[prnceoprsia]

9 PEOPLE ARE HANGING OUT IN ESKAPE COVE 1 RIGHT NOW, AND WANT YOU TO VISIT! GO NOW!

 

On-topic: In that recent picture, you use way too many polys. Try a 12-sided polygon instead. (Click on the polygon tool then type 12S and hit enter. Works with most numbers.)

Alright, Does that mean I have to do what the work over?
EDIT: Before I get much Farther.... How is this?

Should I hide the lines? Or no?

[Linkuto2121]

Alright, Does that mean I have to do what the work over?
EDIT: Before I get much Farther.... How is this?

Should I hide the lines? Or no?

thats amazing who is going to script and will it have animations?

[Kapturrith]

Make it so when you press the light button or a keybind, it switches to one of the beams from the first Metroid Prime, cuz in my opinion, those are the best beams.

[Awasp]

Make the cylinder 8 sided.

[Ector]

Make it so when you press the light button or a keybind, it switches to one of the beams from the first Metroid Prime, cuz in my opinion, those are the best beams.

Wave Beam FTW

[AlphaicX]

Make the cylinder 8 sided.

Pandan says 12 is fine. :|

[prnceoprsia]

Well I dont know how to script at all. And They say never release your first add-on, which I planned on holding true too, But when I finish, I guess I would send you the link if you PM'ed me. I have made more progress on the model... not a lot just a little tweaking I think I will post the pic

[prnceoprsia]

Make it so when you press the light button or a keybind, it switches to one of the beams from the first Metroid Prime, cuz in my opinion, those are the best beams.

I Agree... Well here is the new pic

 I made the nozzle a Little shorter, Brought in the two side things in a little bit. And The yellow Part now goes from red to yellow. This is pretty much the finished product unless Aphiax, or Mntdew have any suggestions for the model. I am Extremely apriacitive of the constuctive critCIAm, In fact Here I found this for You metroid fans out there
Thanks again!

[AlphaicX]

Nice model, although VERY plain, nice model.

[prnceoprsia]

Nice model, although VERY plain, nice model.

What should i add? Becuase Do the lines show up in game? If so I could add some stuff. And thank you very much