A short poem. [Poem Discussion]

[Caution]

Something I wrote when I was sort of down.

Something has been taken
My world has been shaken

At a loss of energy
Such a broken symphony

My life is a waste
Compiled of haste

Love is a lie
Because of one bird's refusal to fly

There is no love
There is no laughter
I attempt to slow down
Yet I only go faster

There is no girl
Whom I think is the one
I think this is the end
Yet it's only just begun

They say I don't care
They say I can't share
The love and compassion within me
But that's only from what they can see

There is no love
There is no compassion
It's a hopeless, harsh feeling
And I have a slow, weak reaction

I was really depressed. I'm out of it now, don't think I'm a suicidal jerk off.

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[Doorman]

Nice, I like it. :D
Mind if I share my own pieces?

[Caution]

Sure, go ahead.

[Doorman]

Emo time, go!

Flying in a cradle,
Wondering where to go,
Screaming out the question,
Is this real or just a show?

Getting to know you,
Is something very strange.
I’ve never gotten close to someone,
Through my own “personal” strain.

How does this connect?
There is something you must see.
Our view on life,
Is very different between you and me.

You see life as something to be taken,
“Something I can call mine.”
I question it,
Do we see it or are we blind?

Do we go around,
Making our own choices,
Or do we walk in “faith”
And have them made for us?

Sitting here
In front of the computer
Typing on facebook
Rather than playing a shooter.

Wondering if
Going back in time
Can be something real
Or only in the mind.

Also thinking,
Thinking of you,
Wondering when
You will re-enter my view.

Head in the clouds,
Feet on the ground,
Nothing going on,
Though technologys all around.

Its all here,
Even though its not mine,
I've got it all
But not through crime.

Its was all burning,
Burning inside,
But now all I want to do
Is push it aside.

I want to crawl under a rock,
Take out my art-pad,
Draw a straight line,
And turn it into something rad.

But whenever I do,
My mind beings to wander,
And then I think of you,
And my efforts being to squander.

[Caution]

Love them. I really like the first one.

[Doorman]

Love them. I really like the first one.

Yeah, the first one was after I had a long religious talk with my radical friend.

[Creola]

I've written numerous emo poems and songs. If only i could find them.    >.<

[Ryuu]

Yeah, the first one was after I had a long religious talk with my radical friend.

Facebook. Now. :(

And your poems are awsome.

[Caution]

I've written numerous emo poems and songs. If only i could find them.    >.<

I've written tons of them, I lost a lot too, lol.

[Creola]

I think i burned maybe two of them.
The rest are in my notebook, which is either in my locker at school or somewhere is my messy-as-forget room. I'm going to look for it soon.

Also:

I have some emo drawings too. want pics? :3

[Caution]

Sure. :P

I wrote at school a bit. I got super pissed at the richardheads in my grade one day and went to the library and wrote in a notebook. One day in Spanish, one of my best friends looked at it and she thought they were lyrics. At the moment, I said yes, and later I told here they weren't and she's like, wow, those were powerful.

[Creola]

K here ya goes










Not that good :c

[Doorman]

Facebook. Now. :(

And your poems are awsome.

Haha, find me. :P

And thanks.

[Creola]

No hands
No space between good and enough

:3

[Doorman]

K here ya goes
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Not that good :c

Oh nice.
I use words not images. :P

Speaking of which, I made another poem:

Flying through the rain,
Not knowing where I'm going.
Where is the edge?
Why isn't it showing?

And then a ray of light,
Brighter than you could know,
Brighter than a football stadium light,
Especially the lights for a show.

But where is it coming from?
No, no it can't be true!
It can't be your smile,
It can't be you!

But it is your joy, your happiness,
That carries me through.
But why can't I believe,
That your smile is true?

I see the pain in your eyes,
The fear in your heart.
I see through your mask,
So don't you dare start.

Don't lie to me with smiles,
Don't tell me you love me,
Don't say it using words,
Prove that you mean it truly.

It's your mask that blocks the sun,
And puts the world in darkness.
So take off your mask,
And shine your life and goodness!

If you hide your feelings,
And hide like a small child,
For you kill a little more of me,
Driving me completely wild.

I love you all,
That's why I don't say it.
I want to prove it,
I want to save it.