Author Topic: a-wasp does his first 6 panel comic!  (Read 2656 times)

Here it is.

Tell me if I could improve on anything if you want.
« Last Edit: September 17, 2009, 03:13:48 PM by awasp1 »

Penal comic, hurr.

Just use a better font, TF2 Build doesn't look too great small.

Nice penels you got there.

Seeing as how you've drawn this, i see you were inspired by Cyanide & Happiness and/or Lawlolawl's comics?


It's in the Tf2 game files, if you don't own it use google.

im too lazy to search for it.
So where is it?
i own tf2

C:\Users\Anybody\Desktop\Games\Steam\steamapps\anybodyz\team fortress 2\tf\resource

lolpenal

The gum friend request joke isn't funny anymore though :(

inb4"itwasneverfunny"

Masterlegodude: Yes I was inspired by those comics.

Taboo: Ya, I just realized that.
Thanks for the input seeing that this is only my second 6 panel comic. ( The other one was drawn on paper.)


Masterlegodude: Yes I was inspired by those comics.
Taboo: Ya, I just realized that.
Thanks for the input seeing that this is only my second 6 panel comic. ( The other one was drawn on paper.)
The topic title says it's your first.
I don't get the joke and you have completely blatantly stolen the art style from the other comic.

That's the first comic I saw on the page, I didn't bother (dare) reading it, but just from looking at it I can understand that what you've posted is hardly your own. You've simply paired it with messy line work, which is very difficult to do in Flash! If you were to have used your own characters and art style, I'm sure this wouldn't seem half as stupid, but you've ignored the line between inspiration and imitation. Being inspired by such a comic or art style is hardly something I can understand, anyhow. The cartooning is bad, really bad. They hardly show any emotion.


The topic title says it's your first.
I don't get the joke and you have completely blatantly stolen the art style from the other comic.
-ousnip-
That's the first comic I saw on the page, I didn't bother (dare) reading it, but just from looking at it I can understand that what you've posted is hardly your own. You've simply paired it with messy line work, which is very difficult to do in Flash! If you were to have used your own characters and art style, I'm sure this wouldn't seem half as stupid, but you've ignored the line between inspiration and imitation. Being inspired by such a comic or art style is hardly something I can understand, anyhow. The cartooning is bad, really bad. They hardly show any emotion.
Somebody's been feeling PMSey lately.

Somebody's been feeling PMSey lately.
I see you're as fond of bad jokes as a-wasp.
« Last Edit: September 17, 2009, 05:54:38 PM by TheWorm »

I see you're as fond of bad jokes as a-wasp.
Hurp.

You are very ragey, you know that?