Author Topic: Want input on anatomy drawing. -Updated  (Read 792 times)



I think that I'm about done with how the majority of how this figure is going to be, but if any one of you see anything that looks out of place please tell me so I can fix it.


I'm pretty sure this is how it is going to be though you can see all of the sharks body (the shark in there now is just a place holder definitely not finished remotely). The canvas size is 2880 px by 2880 px.
« Last Edit: September 20, 2009, 12:53:33 AM by Valen »

Shoulder on the right is non-existent.

Torso is too large.

Leg on the left is too short.

Shirt going over leg on the left is flowing in an unnatural way.

Head is too big.

Shoulder on the right is non-existent.

Torso is too large.

Leg on the left is too short.

Shirt going over leg on the left is flowing in an unnatural way.

Head is too big.

I can fix the shoulder.

For the leg I think I just need to fix up the shoe and pants, I may be wrong though.

For the shirt, I'm going to re draw the way it flows because now he is jumping back fairly fast.

Thanks for telling me what looks akward.

Doesn't look like the right arm has an elbow. Looks like it's made of rubber, because of the way it's bending. imo


This is going to be a long post even when in brief, so don't go blaming me for it being long guys. I'm being as short as possible here this time.

--Head is possibly too large (explained further down).

--Hands too small (a hand can cover the face quite a bit. This is easiest way to prevent hand errors).

--Feet too small

--If he's a kid, then head size isn't as far off, but still off, as well as the torso size is fine as well (IF he's a kid only).

--If you want this to be an adult, then you need to make torso, arms and legs longer.

--If this is a male, neck must be a lot wider. If it's a female, face needs to be changed but neck is fine.

--Hand on our right is facing a bad direction.

--Feet are wrong shape. Toes should point upwards on shoes, feet have a curvature underneath. Hard to explain, so please refer to a real foot picture to understand.

--Upper arms are too short, the length of the upper arm is supposed to be the same as the lower arm. Arms not as long as torso (but should be).

--Ends of arms get too thin before the hands start.

--Ends of pants where feet start need to be redone, they are done poorly.

--Keep shirt folds so they face outside the body. It only looks bad because there's no fold that goes outside the body on the left. Due to his angle, you should have it flow mostly to the left.

--Left sleeve is longer than right sleeve

--No collar.

--Shape of face is risky, and will lead to possible screw up.


Edit: Took out a bid chunk of nonsense
« Last Edit: September 20, 2009, 03:43:58 AM by Trash Man »

Thanks for posting I was sort of waiting for you to post :)

It is a kid, so I think the torso should be fine, I can agree with you on with the neck width, feet position was really hard for me, the arm cannon does look a bit off, for the pants I will have to go look at some pants to get be able to get it right with all those folds what not, and I need to fix the shirt as well as some other things. This is my first time actually trying to get something done right, so I'll make sure this turns out great I'm even going to port the line art to a different painting program since flash isn't the greatest for coloring. I just like using flash for lines because my hands are not the steadiest.

Thanks again.