Beaten to Death

[.::Taboo::.]

The next morning you wake up you have an intense stomach ache and your ass feels like its stuffed with chilly peppers. You crawl to the bathroom and sit on the toilet. You pray to god and ask for forgiveness, you try to travel back in time so you can change the fact that you visited a Mexican restaurant chili eating contest. You grab your shirt and pull it over your head and close your eyes knowing the worst is about to happen. You feel something slipping down your intestine and it burns. It slips out your ass hole with a loud fart but only a little came out, you know this will take a long time because you consumed 3 large bowls of hot chili. After a minute your stomach hurts and your ass burns, your face is red and you are moaning. Another loud fart, and a long snake shaped poo slips out of your ass, its long and it folds in rings on the bottom of the toilet. The pain is so intense that you lean to the left, then right of the toilet seat.

This happens to me every time i eat too much hot food :D

Scat fan sez hot.
I sez gross.

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[JD]

I do see some vivid detail in the actions.. But you make it seem like the person getting beaten to death has no personality whatsoever. Wouldn't you have gotten angry, or, maybe, felt like life shouldn't end that way? Dunno, just figured there should be more thought going on than there already is.

[Regulith]

That was really creepy.

[Azerath]

I do see some vivid detail in the actions.. But you make it seem like the person getting beaten to death has no personality whatsoever. Wouldn't you have gotten angry, or, maybe, felt like life shouldn't end that way? Dunno, just figured there should be more thought going on than there already is.

It says "You". You have to decide how you feel while imagining it.

That was really creepy.

That's who I am. Creepy McCandleJa

[Sockton]

ew

[JD]

It says "You". You have to decide how you feel while imagining it.That's who I am. Creepy McCandleJa

What. If it's me then I wouldn't have forced actions, either. If I have to decide what I'm going to think, I'm going to have to decide what I'm going to do, too.
Flawed logic :U

[Azerath]

But what your doing is already slept out there for you. If you're getting the stuff beat out of you, I doubt you would be able to decide that anyways.

[JD]

But what your doing is already slept out there for you. If you're getting the stuff beat out of you, I doubt you would be able to decide that anyways.

Bleh true =P
Obtw, had any eggs lately? *Inside joke from '08

[Azerath]

Like... with salsa?

[Spockticus]

It's hilarious how the whole story could be put in to "You were beaten to death", yet it was far longer.

[.::Taboo::.]

It's hilarious how the whole story could be put in to "You were beaten to death", yet it was far longer.

One of the signs of a good writer is dragging out simple actions with ridiculously vivid descriptions.

[oromis]

I love it! Except the word your annoys me now...

[Azerath]

Sarcasm?

It's hilarious how the whole story could be put in to "You were beaten to death", yet it was far longer.

What would be the point if I just put "You were beaten to death?"

[Tingalz]

What would be the point if I just put "You were beaten to death?"

I think he was saying that it was funny how you were able to drag it out like that and make it detailed :D