Bump.
I'm reading from the beginning again, and I noticed a problem: When Sburb is just getting started, Andrew says John can't eat Build Grist (they look like tasty Fruit Gushers, so why not) because it doesn't exist on the physical plane, however later we see it littered all over the ground when monsters are slain. ERROR
Also I found this hilarious despite the fact I've probably read it 3 times while reading the whole thing over.
EB: and now there's a meteor coming, and i'm not even joking about that!!!
EB: it's like a big asteroid or comet or something.
EB: in the sky.
EB: heading right for my house!!!!!!!!
TG: oh man
TG: how big is it
EB: i dunno.
EB: big, i guess.
EB: i gotta go!
EB: we'll talk later if i am still alive and the earth isn't blown up.
TG: like the size of texas
TG: or just rhode island
TG: theyre always throwing around these geographical comparisons to give us a sense of scale like it really means anything to us
TG: but its like it doesnt matter its always just like: WOW THATS PRETTY loving BIG
TG: like mr president theres a meteor coming sir. oh yeah, how big is it? its the size of texas sir
TG: OH stuff
TG: or, how big is it? its the size of new york city sir
TG: OH stuff
TG: sir im afraid the comet is the size of your moms richard
TG: OH SNAP
TG: sir are you familiar with jupiter
TG: you mean like the planet?
TG: yeah
TG: well its that big sir
TG: hmm that sounds pretty big
TG: i have a question
TG: is it jupiter?
TG: yes sir, earth is literally under seige by planet loving jupiter
TG: OH stuff
TG: anyway later