Author Topic: University [WMS] Application  (Read 2070 times)

Just finished it. Tell me what you think. Also, [WMS] App.
Credentials:
Name:Sporko
ID:5229
Front:

Side:

Interior Hall:

Balcony Shot:

Side Hall:

Thanks! Please rate. Constructive criticism only, please.

« Last Edit: October 24, 2009, 12:15:17 AM by Krinsae »

Probably get you into whatever clan that is. Could use some interior and exterior.

Hey I remember this thing.
Finished it I see.

However I do see some issues with it.
Firstly, its too much of the same colors, and then all of a sudden you have the colorful bookcases, which makes the bookcases look awkwardly out of place.
Also you should try adding some tiled/print flooring, to see what that does to the build; and don't make those gray.
On top of that, you should make designated lights, rather than just adding lights to random aspects of the walls; it makes it look tacky and underthought.
Oh and add some interior walls, it really pulls together a build.

As for the exterior, I can only say that it needs a roof.

Can I rate?
« Last Edit: October 22, 2009, 09:29:17 PM by Netwars4 »

It's fairly lovey. Could use some detail and variety.

The grayscale is depressingly gray.



Thanks for the advice :)
Also, Justin, what is wrong with it?
5/10 is harsh ):

The latices in the front look weird, and the interior is lacking detail.

Thanks :)
I was sort of rushing to finish it. I have a buttload of homework.
Of course i wait till the last day to finish my report D:

Thanks :)
I was sort of rushing to finish it. I have a buttload of homework.
Of course i wait till the last day to finish my report D:
Just put the build on hold until the weekend?  I am lucky if i get time on Blockland during weekdays.

I dont like the latices and the color is depressing.

Is there anything good about it ):

The shape. Also, needs more plants.

I might make it into a city build over the weekend.