Author Topic: my {wip} hotel/house (getting closer to finsh out side and picture hevy )  (Read 1350 times)

heres my hotel/house
EDIT2:i took away the side cuse it wasn't much to look at (yet)
the front:


the back (same as the front with out doors and stairs)


and i will be adding more floors and maybe a gym or pool
EDIT:added the pool and some other things

the valves for pool (yes they realy work)


the pool (sorry for bad angle)


the roof is done and i gto a new over veiw
« Last Edit: November 03, 2009, 09:40:54 PM by e-maxx »

nice big boxy cubish box you got ther, and slightly spammy in my opinionwatch him get mad and rage at me?

I love the lack of windows in some parts and the excessive doors in the front [/sarcasm]


and i not revaling what will make not a box but a cozy little hotel

and i not revaling what will make not a box but a cozy little hotel
I don't understand what you said.


pool walls are spammy, big JVS usage on one spot.

pool walls are spammy, big JVS usage on one spot.
try to fix that towmarrow cuz i wanted to get it done becuse the roof needed a lot work and i tried to geta lot stuff done in a little time

try to fix that towmarrow cuz i wanted to get it done becuse the roof needed a lot work and i tried to geta lot stuff done in a little time
No wonder

i bet its hard to get in the pool, why 3 front doors? why 3 windows in a row... list can go on

Yikes, where to start.

Add a little variety to the shape of your hotel. You can hardly admit you see many buildings aside from houses and gas stations that are just boxes. Secondly, don't use JVS windows. As much as they would be nice to use it takes the challenge and creativity out of a build. Make your own windows for more credit. Thirdly, add more windows. Hotels in particular have windows in most every room and by the looks of it I can safely guess yours doesn't. Then, don't make the build so spammy. Learn to use larger bricks and to not overuse those. Also try to make it so the exterior bricks line up. I don't know how else to word that, sorry if it's vague. And lastly, you need more clearance. Hotel ceilings aren't so short you could touch them without even trying and the pool is usually not above ground.

Dude, you just Failed O_O