my book in production

[Yumyumdude]

 i am currently writing a book. this book is a Sci-fi book about a distinct human civilization on a another plant {technologically advance.} and has created a new creature, witch is destroying the human race. the main character is sent to destroy them . i forgot to tell you, but the created spices is on the planets artificial  moon, and so the main character is sent to the center of the artificial satellite an cages the speed in the core of the moon so the moon get gravitationally strong that its metal infinities cant support its weight so it collapses in on it's self. there is more to the story, but i think i lost you. i need help with naming the characterise, the creature and the star system's name. later, the creature will be destroyed . i hope you make good comments on how the names are made and if you like what my story is about

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[lolzorz mcgee]

Oh hey, someone else with a spore avatar. :D  I am no longer alone.

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[Yumyumdude]

Actually , spore has helped me in the creation of this book. do you want to here what happens after the moon is destroyed?

[lolzorz mcgee]

Actually , spore has helped me in the creation of this book. do you want to here what happens after the moon is destroyed?

Not really.

[Yumyumdude]

k i guess

[A.R.C.]

this book is a Sufi book about a distinct human civilization on a another plant  wat

 and has created a new creature, witch is destroying the human race.  Why?

the main character is sent to distroy them . Why?


i forgot to tell you, but the created spices is on the planets artificial  moon, and so the main character is sent to the center of the artificial satellite an cages the speed in the core of the moon so the moon get gravitationally strong that its metal infinities cant support its weight so it collapses in on it's self. there is more to the story, but i think i lost you. i need help with naming the characterise, the creature and the star system's name. later, the creature will be destroyed .  Not the best plot, but ok.

[Yumyumdude]

well you see, this story has a FICTIONAL human race on another world. they make a new race of created witch is so smart, that they start to destroy the human civilization on the home plant(not earth) but the main character is sent out to destroy them by over powering the moons core and it collapses in on itself, but a fleet of the creators that were heading to the human's home world were no affected by this, so now they are scattered, an in later parts of the book, they will pop out of nowhere, welling to fight the main character( with allies) in a deviating  brawl.

[Yumyumdude]

 o ya. the creatures were created for new test for there study . they were later wanted to bring and settle them one of the moons they had and see them change into a tribe then a civilization. but there where giving birth with a little to much brains  than was planned....                     A LOT MORE

[Supreme Guy]

Kay, if you are going to write a book you should:

• Improve spelling (Which, species, oh, yeah, not, destroy, characters ect.)
• Tell us your approximate age
• use better grammar and punctuation (So we can understand you better)
• inform us on what program you will use to make this/how you'll be writing this up.

So, I hope you will understand these mandatory requirements and hopefully become a better writer.
Sorry, but the story sounds a bit stupid and cliché.

[Lalam24]

I don't see this going anywhere with the way you type.

[Yumyumdude]

Kay, if you are going to write a book you should:

• Improve spelling (Which, species, oh, yeah, not, destroy, characters ect.)
• Tell us your approximate age
• use better grammar and punctuation (So we can understand you better)
• inform us on what program you will use to make this/how you'll be writing this up.

So, I hope you will understand these mandatory requirements and hopefully become a better writer.
Sorry, but the story sounds a bit stupid and cliché.

i know i know i know. a lot of people say im a bad speller. when i still did spelling i beler passed just by a C-. that g\how bad i am. But its true. i need to improve if i want to write a book

[Yumyumdude]

Kay, if you are going to write a book you should:

• Improve spelling (Which, species, oh, yeah, not, destroy, characters ect.)
• Tell us your approximate age
• use better grammar and punctuation (So we can understand you better)
• inform us on what program you will use to make this/how you'll be writing this up.

So, I hope you will understand these mandatory requirements and hopefully become a better writer.
Sorry, but the story sounds a bit stupid and cliché.

I will be using , I think , Microsoft word

[Yumyumdude]

OK. im groin to tell the next part. after the artificial moon is destroyed, the created animals have to fiend a new home... and friend the person who destroyed the moon. So the main character  has to not return  to his home plant, now under deep siege under the creatures they created. so he heads to a nearby plant that is closer to the stars called Nathan. another alien civilization is on it, and there always really willing to help others...                  .... but right now is not time for help. after a rise of a single world empire  that started about 657 years ago ( 497 for us) that was the making of this new empire, but its first ruler died without making a rule on how a new ruler would be elected, so the empire has collapsed and there is civil war a pound  them. the main character makes friend's with one of these people who live there , but in order for them to help him , he must retrieve the empires most powerful weapon that is hidden in a tomb on a small plant at the fare end of the star system. i am thinking about having the main characters friend be killed in a bombing of the city he lives in or have some major wounds . 
how about we vote on that?

 post a YES if you say that he should die or post a NO of him getting just sever wounds.

[Cody574]

Improve your spelling/grammar, come up with a more original plot.

[.::Taboo::.]

Instead of coming here and saying "THUS IS WHUT HAPENS," actually, maybe, you know, WRITE IT?