Author Topic: Generic Church (AoB app)  (Read 2072 times)

The walls don't match the building. It's too much of a box shape and is very plain. The bell looks bad because of the mix of ramps and rounds. You should just leave it at ramps. It makes a much better look. Rounds look overused on the bell tower roof. It makes it look weird. The bell tower roof should also be taller, so it would match the rest of the roofs. The entrance is a bit small and lacks detail. I usually see big and detailed entrances for churches. Now for the interior. There are too many lights. You should just stick to a few, otherwise it wouldn't be really realistic. The windows could use some kind of design on them. Most church windows show some kind of person on it. I think the roof should be taller, and you should be able to see the windows in the towers. Overall, the build is okay, but I don't think it would get you into AoB, unless you improved a lot on it. Good luck though!
« Last Edit: December 22, 2009, 12:58:26 PM by MrCookie »

Decision: Not Accepted

Rating: 7.5/10

It's not a bad build. Cookie pretty much covered all the bases here though:
The walls don't match the building. It's too much of a box shape and is very plain. The bell looks bad because of the mix of ramps and rounds. You should just leave it at ramps. It makes a much better look. Rounds look overused on the bell tower roof. It makes it look weird. The bell tower roof should also be taller, so it would match the rest of the roofs. The entrance is a bit small and lacks detail. I usually see big and detailed entrances for churches. Now for the interior. There are too many lights. You should just stick to a few, otherwise it wouldn't be really realistic. The windows could use some kind of design on them. Most church windows show some kind of person on it. I think the roof should be taller, and you should be able to see the windows in the towers.

If you work on it a bit, it definately has potential to get in, but I think it's lacking something at the moment.


Roof is nice.
Walls are fugly.

The body looks to short for the roof


It's not a bad build. Cookie pretty much covered all the bases here though:
If you work on it a bit, it definately has potential to get in, but I think it's lacking something at the moment.
so you're saying, If I change it a bit then I could get in?

so you're saying, If I change it a bit then I could get in?

You need to make a few major changes, like the exterior as said above.