Author Topic: Dyath's AoB App  (Read 2977 times)

My name in-game is Dyath (BL_ID 2036) and this is my app to AoB
 
The front:

The living room:


The kitchen:


The upstairs:

The computer room:

The bedroom:

The back view:

« Last Edit: January 03, 2010, 03:38:02 PM by Clamy Jr »

Great interior! I wish I could say the same about the exterior though. Try to choose more fittin colors. Blue and red doesnt really fit that well. Generally the exterior just looks unnatural.


Nice.
Too small though. A bit bigger makes this 10/10.
9/10 my rating.

9/10

It's unique since not many people do stuff like this.
but a lot of the floors look really weird.

7/10
The interior is nice, but the exterior just looks plain weird. Try to keep it from switching colors like it does.

8/10. Interior is great, exterior.. not so much. Very plain, color shifting is bad. The sand height with the mix of grass ruins,

If you take your hand and cover up different parts of the build (exterior and interior) individual parts are beautiful. But when you look at the whole thing at once, it just doesn't mesh up. You swich between colors and styles so suddenly that it's hard to keep up. If you could do a better job of staying consistant with your style, this would be magnificient.
So it boils down to:
Individual pieces: 9/10
The whole build: 7/10
Good luck getting in :D

The exterior is very hodge-podge. Although the interior is very well detailed.

I like it! Make sure you PM Jake or tell him ingame that you made an app or he won't see it

I fixed it
Before:

After:

I personally like the interior, but your colors for the exterior were poorly chosen. I also suggest more foliage in the backyard.
6/10

Oasis, you underated it to much. I think it's pretty good, I'de give a 7.5/10

Ah, the exterior is much better now. However, my ratings still stand.

Oasis, you underated it to much. I think it's pretty good, I'de give a 7.5/10
Here is how I came to my rating, which is an opinion, so I don't see how I can underrate or overrate.

Interior: 9/10
Exterior: 5/10
Color-scheme: 4/10
Landscape: 4/10
Brick Use 8/10

Total: 30/50 = 6/10