The Adventure of Valen and Khorde 3

[Indesisive]

Hey guys. I'm bros with Valen and Khorde. If i am correct at least one of them is popular in these forums. I haven't done much on these forums. BUT I am glad to tell you, that the third episode in the AoVK series is complete. So you can watch it and tell me whatcha think. http://indesisive.deviantart.com/art/Adventures-of-Valen-n-Khorde-3-149899061

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[Packer]

HURRRR, its err.. very plain and not very interesting.

[heedicalking]

Everyone is popular on these forums. Everyone knows who everyone else is pretty much.

[Swholli]

This totally didn't take like 4 months to make.

(You are so slow)

[Valen]

Nice I am not disappoint!

Where is the second easter egg? I found the fish one

[Indesisive]

This totally didn't take like 4 months to make.

(You are so slow)

I know. I just procrastonate. Alot.

[Indesisive]

HURRRR, its err.. very plain and not very interesting.

Did you even watch the animation... Or did you just look at the picture?

[FrAgGEr]

That was terrible.

[Muzzles56]

That was terrible.

QFT
Just like all the others

[Indesisive]

That was terrible.

What do you do audio? You take pictures with an expensive camera, that takes no talent and no effort at all.

[FrAgGEr]

What do you do audio? You take pictures with an expensive camera, that takes no talent and no effort at all.

Sure, no effort what so ever.
And no talent, I don't think of what i'm taking pictures of, no way. I just click buttons.
I laugh at you, you ignorant dumbass.

I didn't want to do this but I guess I'll critique your work just so you'll get off my back.

As far as art goes, this animation is incredibly sloppy. The drawings are hard to look at due to the "sketchy" lines.
And like you said in the deviantart description, bad tweens.

The sound is incredibly loud and annoying. No, i'm not going to adjust my sound just for an animation, my sound level is perfect where it is and if the sound is too loud, i will complain.

Story wise, there is none. It goes from a loving cat in space.. to "you" in a dumpster.

I'll give this a 1/5 for effort.

[Khorde]

blackrica.

[Tingalz]

Sure, no effort what so ever.
And no talent, I don't think of what i'm taking pictures of, no way. I just click buttons.
I laugh at you, you ignorant dumbass.

I didn't want to do this but I guess I'll critique your work just so you'll get off my back.

As far as art goes, this animation is incredibly sloppy. The drawings are hard to look at due to the "sketchy" lines.
And like you said in the deviantart description, bad tweens.

The sound is incredibly loud and annoying. No, i'm not going to adjust my sound just for an animation, my sound level is perfect where it is and if the sound is too loud, i will complain.

Story wise, there is none. It goes from a loving cat in space.. to "you" in a dumpster.

I'll give this a 1/5 for effort.

Don't you need to go take pictures of your ugly ass friends or something?

[FrAgGEr]

Don't you need to go take pictures of your ugly ass friends or something?

yes

[Khorde]

yes

you should take pictures of models