Author Topic: Legends of Zelda: Spirit Trucks (FANFICTION)  (Read 1882 times)

I've always wanted to write a story about LoZ, and Spirit Tracks seemed like the best LoZ game ever so I wrote about that.




CHAPTER 1


Link was exited as he got from bed. He was going to have his engin award today so he was getting his things fasst. His grandpa walkd to Link, who was starting to go from the house. "BE CAREFUL LINK WHILE ON TRAINS AND MAKE SURE TO COME BACK AFTER YOU GET AWARDS" he said, and link and him shared moments for a sec. "I WOULD HAVE NOT BEEN THIS FAR WITHOUT YOU" Link said and he walked out of the hose.

As he waked to the train, he looked at the see. This game wasn't the link game with boat though, so he kept walking to train. When he reeched it, this trian guy with a name that no one could remeber talked to him, telling him that his time was short for getting to the castle. "But I can't miss my awards" link sad with frown. "this is first train level it isnt hard, dun wurry" the train guy said and they hoped on train. "This is not as fun as boat and rail is slow" said link as they road down tracks. "but you can switch rails and pull horn :C" the train guy respnded.

When they reached castle, link ran throguh town but guards stoped him. "YOU CAN NOT GO PAST" Guards yelled and bloked path, but link told him he was getting awards and they moved. Link ran to throne romm and met zelda and this guy with hats. "I hereby anounce that link is engine and he get award" she said as handed him award. Then she leaned in closed and handed letter. "This is secret don't tell people" she siad.

Link opened it after everyone left and drawed the secret paths on map. the paths led to Zelda's room where there was Zelda. "Link I am so glad you here now" she said. "I want to goto the tower but the hat guy says no because I will not have safe. You have train though so yu can take me" Link was caution about doing secrets like this, but he agreed and zelda gave him green close. "wear and you lock like guard" zelda saud and he put on. Link used touch controls to get Zelda past guards until they goat to train.

Train guy and them climbed into train and started roding to spirit tower. tracks were gone though so they crashed and tower broke apart and evil train flew by. "OH NO" Zelda said and then hat guy and this claw guy came. "WERE TAKING ZELDA WITH US AND DONT FIGHT BACK BECAUSE YOU WILL NOT WIN" hat guy said and took off hats which had horns underneath. "HOW COULD I NOT KNOW YOU HAD EVIL" zelda yelled and train guy pulled out his sword to protact zelda. Claw guy through him at train after a sword fight though and link was only one left to protect her. claw guy threw link too and he was to week so zelda was stolen.



Tell me if you like it and I will write more.

I wish I'd actually taken the time to play some Zelda games in my childhood. :U But I have not.
Also, lots of grammatical and spelling errors. :S
Edit: Is this a joke, actually? :P

Edit: Is this a joke, actually? :P

Have you played Spirit Tracks?

I think you might want to brush up on your spelling before you get into creative writing.

Edit: And sentence structure while you're at it.


I think you might want to brush up on your spelling before you get into creative writing.

Edit: And sentence structure while you're at it.

Did people make Picasso redo his paintings because they didn't look realistic?

I THINK NOT

Did people make Picasso redo his paintings because they didn't look realistic?

I THINK NOT
There's a difference between paintings and stories. Why do you think book publishers have proof readers? Why does that even apply to childrens books?

Take it as a suggestion, not an insult.


Have you played Spirit Tracks?
I wish I'd actually taken the time to play some Zelda games in my childhood. :U But I have not.
You can't write very well, then. :U This reminded me of that Gordon Freeman video on YouTube that some guy made a song out of.

Fanfiction is for obsessed fanboys.

Still think it's a joke, over here.


Hey hey hey wait a minute, I thought Link couldn't speak!



Its because he speaks English as his second language.