Author Topic: My first and second Comic (Fix!) (Read 3216 times)

BlydeBadger · February 09, 2010, 05:03:26 PM

Well I have done a comic before, just not on the computer. I know it sucks but its my first, and Im still thinking for any sick or non sick jokes. My second is for Valentines. It pretty much sucks... bad.. I tried my best to make the words big.

I could really use some help.

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A.R.C. · February 09, 2010, 05:05:05 PM

Looks nice.

Dippindots · February 09, 2010, 05:21:49 PM

Looks nice.

dkamm65 · February 09, 2010, 05:24:52 PM

Quote from: A.R.C. on February 09, 2010, 05:05:05 PM

Looks nice.

I didn't laugh, but

Quote from: Dippindots on February 09, 2010, 05:21:49 PM

Looks nice.

Dippindots · February 09, 2010, 05:45:27 PM

It does look nice doesn't it?

Ector · February 09, 2010, 06:10:55 PM

This looks so nice that it causes me to think it looks nice. In all that is nice, this is nice.

Sirrus · February 09, 2010, 06:12:54 PM

It looks pretty good but it's not funny.

Khorde · February 09, 2010, 06:19:11 PM

I don't believe that you'll fall through with more than 5 comics, really.
But if you prove me wrong, you can gloat all you want and stop on my esnake.

Anybody · February 09, 2010, 06:19:32 PM

It's small and seems too crowded, you could try to make the backround less distracting.

Narkro555 · February 09, 2010, 06:39:15 PM

No too funny, but looks really nice. I hope to see more from you

BlydeBadger · February 09, 2010, 09:06:47 PM

ba-bump

Sirrus · February 09, 2010, 09:51:41 PM

First comic looks better and less cramped but the lettering looks horrendous now.

NickTheSushi · February 09, 2010, 09:55:02 PM

Nice work.

laremere · February 09, 2010, 11:00:11 PM

I recommend using the font comic sans: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comic_Sans

Dippindots · February 09, 2010, 11:01:46 PM

I think it looks nice.