[KC] Application{IMG HVY} Updated!

[astrobear]

Hello all, I was recently building a house on SuperYoshiBro's server, and decided it was good enough to app with.I'm appling for structure, brickcount 2332.
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Rate: by saying if this will get me in or not.

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[Loopyla1]

6/10

The roof is ugly
The fence is too low
Mailbox is too far away for a house with no driveway
Windows are too small
Oven is ugly
Color scheme is ugly
Bed is too thin
No need for stilts.

The only thing I really like about it is the floor design in picture 2 and the couch in pictures 3 & 4.
This will most likely not get you in.

[astrobear]

6/10

The roof is ugly
The fence is too low
Mailbox is too far away for a house with no driveway
Windows are too small
Oven is ugly
Color scheme is ugly
Bed is too thin
No need for stilts.

The only thing I really like about it is the floor design in picture 2 and the couch in pictures 3 & 4.
This will most likely not get you in.

Yeh, I will take this in to mind. But with the roof I was trying something new I have seen recently. And the fences were to blend in with what was next to my build on yoshi's server.
I will definitely fix the bed in my next houses' though, 3 plates?  

[Glider]

Good luck although I doubt this'll get you in.

[KoopaScooper]

Uh, what section are you applying for? I honestly don't see it in the OP, so I'm going to say Structure because it's a house.
Also, put the brick count.

Rating time.
7/10
Windows look nice.

Bed is too thin

Dresser looks a bit too big.
Floor looks terrible for a kitchen floor.

My vote doesn't count, so good luck.

[astrobear]

Good luck although I doubt this'll get you in.

Thanks, but yeah I know. I realized didn't have enough room to make a bathroom, but that was after I was halfway done.

[astrobear]

Uh, what section are you applying for? I honestly don't see it in the OP, so I'm going to say Structure because it's a house.
Also, put the brick count.

Rating time.
7/10
Windows look nice.Dresser looks a bit too big.
Floor looks terrible for a kitchen floor.

My vote doesn't count, so good luck.

Ok, I'll remember these next time*makes a mental note*.

[Conan]

I say its nice, but the same goes for the fences and roof.

I like the flooring of the kitchen though, matches mine IRL. Flooring under the couch sucks IMO, and the L tiles get a bit boring, next time try to create another type or something.

The Bed is too elevated, you'd want it less tall and also thicker.

You need more plain shots and less DOF.

NINJAEDIT: From a Professional POV, 7/10
From POV compared to my building, 10/10. Not that I can't do it, its just I don't take the time to.

[zenzil]

Nicely done

[duke 838]

6/10

The roof is ugly
The fence is too low
Mailbox is too far away for a house with no driveway
Windows are too small
Oven is ugly
Color scheme is ugly
Bed is too thin
No need for stilts.

The only thing I really like about it is the floor design in picture 2 and the couch in pictures 3 & 4.
This will most likely not get you in.

Wow, that was rather richardish of you.

[RedSaturn]

6/10

The roof is ugly
The fence is too low
Mailbox is too far away for a house with no driveway
Windows are too small
Oven is ugly
Color scheme is ugly
Bed is too thin
No need for stilts.

The only thing I really like about it is the floor design in picture 2 and the couch in pictures 3 & 4.
This will most likely not get you in.