limo (first add-on) *update 2*

[kodi]

i saw this in suggestions and requests and thought i would take a crack at it. its my first add-on and its not good enough for the game, so i posted it here. please give me advice to make my models better.



*update*
here's what I've done
lowered the roof
new ornament
new wheel cover thingys
licence plate
grill
fixed uneven edges

*2*
added windows
extruded lights

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[Raider.]

It's blocko alright!

[vlad54]

NOT BAD.

[Fizzles]

Not bad, but try extruding next time. It isn't hard to see you just put a bunch of boxes on each other.

[kodi]

will try for next time

[Fizzles]

Maybe a small amount of grill-texture would be nice as well.

[Elphie]

I love you for posting this here. Most peoples first addons go right to the addon section.

On-Topic: It looks... OK, If you were wanting to edit this for the addon section. Try to make it, A little Less Blocko

[kodi]

hmmm how so?

[Audax]

Roof is a bit high, maybe lower it?

[kodi]

Roof is a bit high, maybe lower it?

i needed to be that high to fit the minifigs head in

[Fizzles]

Do some be-leveling.
Change the grate to be a bit more than a box.
Extrude, don't slap together boxes.
Line stuff up a bit more. (The tire guard seems to be slanted)
Change the hood ornament and steering wheel

[Swift488]

Eww... Wait...
Its pretty good for a first mod.
Less boxy next time, though.

[kodi]

Thanks for your consructive critsism guy's
tihings I will do:
lower roof
change orniment / wheel
fix "boxy look"
extrude more
add grill

[goz3rr]

I see you just used boxes, And these are overlapping.
You should try to start working with vertices (vertex tool)
You create 3 of them, Select them and press F. Make sure your 3d view is in FlatShaded view and no faces become black, if so: press ctrl+shift+f.

This way you have less vertices, and your model looks a bit better!
But a nice model anyway

[Fizzles]

I see you just used boxes, And these are overlapping.
You should try to start working with vertices (vertex tool)
You create 3 of them, Select them and press F. Make sure your 3d view is in FlatShaded view and no faces become black, if so: press ctrl+shift+f.

I generally create a box and then extrude that. It gives you a much more blocko result.