I think I might be improving

[BlydeBadger]

Old:



Remade:

                            Tell me what you think..

[Ad Bot]

[Supreme Guy]

The before has more animé eyes and is cute.

The after is more detailed and non-cartoonish.

You are better than me in all ways. *Bows*

[WhoDa?]

The before one would look awesome in a animation series.

[King of losers]

Very nice work.

[Hazard]

I'd rather do the second one.

[Sebster 105]

5 months for that?

[FrAgGEr]

they both suck

plus, don't use real background for cartoons

[NickTheSushi]

5 months for that?

5 months later after practicing, derp.

edit:

they both suck

Just a protip in case you ever think about it: you won't last long as a motivational speaker.

[Kobewarrior]

Make a top-less one.

[Lalam24]

The style in both of them is too shoddy to promote any improvement.  You did advance in realistic proportions a bit, but the overall proportions are pretty bad.

[BlydeBadger]

5 months for that?

5 months later, I decided to redo my old one that looked like stuff.

I'd rather do the second one.

It was a drawing of my girlfriend -.-

[Moybus]

they both look wonky, but the second one less so.

[Madmitten]

before is young
after is older
i dont get it

[Volko]

Very nice work.

[Valen]

they both suck

plus, don't use real background for cartoons

He can do whatever he wants >:C



I like them though, nice improvement. You should try to use lines that aren't as thick so you can add more detail.