Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)

[Acolyptor]

In thought, its 70%, On screen, Nothing. But Once I think of all that should be, get people, It should be a start.

Okay.
If I ever coincidentially (Longest word I've ever said here) find you hosting a server for the recording, If you allow me, I might try to help by:

1.) Help with effects

or

2.) Be the Demon

You can choose either one.

Oh, and,

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[Isjix]

I do not like reading long things, but this was just interesting to me. Good story, I want a video of this, and more chapters. Hope this goes well for you.

[Dillpickle]

I do not like reading long things, but this was just interesting to me. Good story, I want a video of this, and more chapters. Hope this goes well for you.

Thanks, I have got Eksi to almost help in the video, as in acting. The Map is an easy, the only thing that would be of hard would be to make voices and other things like editing, but I hope to it would go great.

[Acolyptor]

The only thing that would be of hard would be to make voices and other things like editing

Most BL Videos I've seen don't have voices.
Sound effects are a must, but voices aren't really necessary.

[Edward Digato]

[Dillpickle]

Lazy Little Freak, This is a good story.

[Dillpickle]

Bump because I feel the need to make this noticable until the video comes out =\ Again.

[Blazo928]

Dylan, That was awesome. I think that's the best story you've ever told.

[Dillpickle]

Dylan, That was awesome. I think that's the best story you've ever told.

Thanks Bro.

[mp7964]

AWESOME STORY
scared teh brix outta meh :P
10/10

[Dillpickle]

AWESOME STORY
scared teh brix outta meh :P
10/10

Thanks

[Alphadin]

Great story, Not that creepy.
10/10

I can record if you want any help with the video.

[Dillpickle]

Great story, Not that creepy.
10/10

I can record if you want any help with the video.

Oh, I can record. If I make any clip smaller then 30 seconds I can use FRAPS Demo, if longer, Hypercam 2.
 I would need to record if I want to edit it. I don't want anyone else either.

[Plasmus]

    This is very odd. I walked back downstairs, and opened the fridge. The light was out, Odd... I got some milk, it was cold, very cold. How so? If the light is off, the power to the fridge is, but how is this still cold? It must of been turned off recently.. I poured a glass, and walked to the living room, plopped down on the couch, and reached for the remote. I turned the Tv on. Nothing. I pressed the button again, nothing.. I checked the batteries, they were warm.. How could they be used? I turned the Tv off when I left, which was three hours ago. I got up, and walked to my room again. I closed the door, and locked it. I walked over to the bed table, and looked at my Bible, It was open, and flipped over. I never leave it open, nor put it Cross side down.. I put it back, and sat on my bed. This cant be right.. Three figures, light in fridge off, yet the milk is cold, Tv off, yet the batteries are warm.. And Bible was messed with.. I sat up, and looked out the window. It was pitch black, all I could hear was rain. The Moon wasn't even out. I looked down the drive way, where the lamp was, I saw a figure, standing on the very side of it, looking straight, eye to eye, at me. I took out my camera, it wouldn't turn on! I flipped it over, and saw that the batteries were gone! All I did was set it down in the living room when I just got home, and now, when I got it when I found the Tv Remote didn't work, batteries gone! There must be someone in this house.. I can't see them, Nor hear them. I started to the door, and unlocked it, I walked halfway downstairs, and all the lights went out, I stumbled down, and hit my head on the bottom.... I lay there... Knocked out...

ALTERNATE ENDING OF CHAPTER ONE

[BobSevenSevens]

Pretty good story. I give it an 8/10.