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What did you think of the Story?

It was awesome, and scary
53 (48.2%)
It was good, and creepy
34 (30.9%)
It was okay, and odd
12 (10.9%)
It was bad, and nothing
11 (10%)

Total Members Voted: 110

Author Topic: Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)  (Read 18487 times)

I like the story, the pictures kinda of kicked me out of the feel of anything creepy...

:|

wow! its so inspiring!!



Man that guy must love his camera. :O

Man that guy must love his camera. :O
Well He was a person who loved to take pictures of very weird things, and this is something he just had to take a picture of.

You need more pictures.
And, add a picture of BACON.
:D


-The awakening-

I opened my eyes. There it was, The black figure. Hanging over me. I blinked and it was gone. I sat up and it was in front of me, I was in a very dark grass flat plain.. I blinked again. It was to my left. I blinked again, this time to my right. I closed my eyes and screamed horrendously. When I opened them, I was back in the hospital room.
"Hold" Said the doctor. Zzzzzzzzz "Shock". Vumph. Black went through my eyes. I couldn't see anything. But I heard a faint talking.

"What happened?" The doctor said filled with curiosity.
"I-I-I don't know. He has a heatbeat but the machine shows nothing." Said the nurse now afraid.

Then, all I could hear were screams.

"Ahhhhhhhhhh" The doctor screamed.
"Wha...What is-" The nurse started to say, to be interrupted by a gushing sound.

Suddenly, my vision came back. I looked around, blood was splattered everywhere but there were no bodies. I looked over to my left, I saw a trail of blood leading out of the room. Now completely and entirely scared out of my mind, I sat up and stood. Feeling the cold tile covered in blood send shivers through my spine. I started to walk towards to doorway trying to keep my balance. There were no lights in the hallway. I walked out and stood there. Suddenly, I felt something hit my head. I felt what it was, and looked at it on my fingers. It was blood. I looked up only to see the most terrifying thing I've ever seen in my life.
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I read your story and felt inspiration to write a sequel like story of my own. Yours is truly great.
« Last Edit: July 07, 2010, 01:12:32 AM by Cyanian »

Long Freaking Awesome Part that I should of added Quote
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I read your story and felt inspiration to write a sequel like story of my own. Yours is truly great.

You are my Best friend, Take my babies.

   Really, This got me to really make another part, and the video, Honestly afraid to say I haven't done anything, I have to still get things all right, and crap.
I can't tomorrow when I would usually
(Sense its my birthday, Wish me happy birthday please? *n*' )

Ill be rounding up Friends to take part in the video

And-a-freaking-gain No you do not take a part in the video skyblue6245




Then he woke the heck up and realised that he was in his bed and it was ALL A DREAM! /insidejoke

If you already started working on the video, how much of it is complete (in percentage)?

If you already started working on the video, how much of it is complete (in percentage)?
In thought, its 70%, On screen, Nothing. But Once I think of all that should be, get people, It should be a start.

You are my Best friend, Take my babies.

   Really, This got me to really make another part, and the video, Honestly afraid to say I haven't done anything, I have to still get things all right, and crap.
I can't tomorrow when I would usually
(Sense its my birthday, Wish me happy birthday please? *n*' )

Ill be rounding up Friends to take part in the video

And-a-freaking-gain No you do not take a part in the video skyblue6245


I am not offended. I only said it three times, want me too say it three hundred and spam all your topics? I could, but I wont, you freaking idiot.