-The awakening-
I opened my eyes. There it was, The black figure. Hanging over me. I blinked and it was gone. I sat up and it was in front of me, I was in a very dark grass flat plain.. I blinked again. It was to my left. I blinked again, this time to my right. I closed my eyes and screamed horrendously. When I opened them, I was back in the hospital room.
"Hold" Said the doctor. Zzzzzzzzz "Shock". Vumph. Black went through my eyes. I couldn't see anything. But I heard a faint talking.
"What happened?" The doctor said filled with curiosity.
"I-I-I don't know. He has a heatbeat but the machine shows nothing." Said the nurse now afraid.
Then, all I could hear were screams.
"Ahhhhhhhhhh" The doctor screamed.
"Wha...What is-" The nurse started to say, to be interrupted by a gushing sound.
Suddenly, my vision came back. I looked around, blood was splattered everywhere but there were no bodies. I looked over to my left, I saw a trail of blood leading out of the room. Now completely and entirely scared out of my mind, I sat up and stood. Feeling the cold tile covered in blood send shivers through my spine. I started to walk towards to doorway trying to keep my balance. There were no lights in the hallway. I walked out and stood there. Suddenly, I felt something hit my head. I felt what it was, and looked at it on my fingers. It was blood. I looked up only to see the most terrifying thing I've ever seen in my life.
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I read your story and felt inspiration to write a sequel like story of my own. Yours is truly great.