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What did you think of the Story?

It was awesome, and scary
53 (48.2%)
It was good, and creepy
34 (30.9%)
It was okay, and odd
12 (10.9%)
It was bad, and nothing
11 (10%)

Total Members Voted: 110

Author Topic: Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)  (Read 18453 times)

I like the "come back to life idea." You can have him come back as a vampire, and hunt down some guy, and have it all end in a loop.

"Pain. Pain is all I can feel. And a hunger. As I slowly return to the land of the living, I feel a sensation leaving me, almost like a memory slipping away. I open my eyes, and stare into another's. My creator."


"Pain. Pain is all I can feel. And a hunger. As I slowly return to the land of the living, I feel a sensation leaving me, almost like a memory slipping away. I open my eyes, and stare into another's. My creator."
    That sounds very good. If I make another story, Ill think about that.

first you should make it in video form

first you should make it in video form

    Me and a friend is making a trailor, well he is sense he just wants too. But Ill help and we'l upload the video to my channel whenever we get it up.

I read this how William Shatner reads Kirks lines, took the scary out of it :(


I hope you get to making a sequel. Also, one-day bump?

one-day bump?

I dunno. I like to keep this on the front page somewhere, so the comments can flow.

    Me and a friend is making a trailor, well he is sense he just wants too. But Ill help and we'l upload the video to my channel whenever we get it up.
You said I could do it too! D:

... You said I could too! D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D:

 :panda:

Is this supposed to be a comedy sketch or what?


the fridge's power was off but the MILK WAS STILL COLD! OOGABOOGABOOGA!
I can't describe how hard I'm laughing right now

Is this supposed to be a comedy sketch or what?

No, A Scary Story.
I can't describe how hard I'm laughing right now
I saw that, and didn't read the "OOGABOOGABOOGA" But when I finally read it, I Lol'd too =P

you still said I could do the video too...