Poll

What did you think of the Story?

It was awesome, and scary
53 (48.2%)
It was good, and creepy
34 (30.9%)
It was okay, and odd
12 (10.9%)
It was bad, and nothing
11 (10%)

Total Members Voted: 110

Author Topic: Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)  (Read 18469 times)

I like this a lot, but I had to give it the 'creepy' vote because I simply can't be creeped out by blocks. Either way, excellent and very well done. However, your attempt at fancy book speach annoyed me occasionally and if I had a nickel for every time you said 'odd'...

Have a cookie for the outstanding work  :cookie:

Thanks.
you still said I could do the video too...

Your not going to be in the video. Shut up now. Seriously, go make a Youtube account and make your own videos.

Well, due to checking the latest comments (And the demons face *shudders*), I think I can probably draw it in its Non-Blockhead nature. Who knows? I might even post the image here. Other than that:
Read the story a second time, still 10/10

I like it. I think you should give the figure a reason for going after him.

How about teh killer was bored?

How about teh killer was bored?
That's a terrible motivation. Not interesting either.

I like it. I think you should give the figure a reason for going after him.
he's an evil bastard

I like it. I think you should give the figure a reason for going after him.
I say it's a demon.
'Nuff said.

How about teh killer was bored?

Didn't I say something to you like..

Your not going to be in the video thread. Shut up now. Seriously, go make a Youtube account thread and make your own videos ideas.

Awesome story 1-10 for me 10 it was the awesome story make a other one

Nice story. But you can't make another. The guy is dead.

Nice story. But you can't make another. The guy is dead.
Me Calls Bullstuff!

Nice story. But you can't make another. The guy is dead.
Yeah. But people do say do something that includes an investigation about this, or the demon/vampire/rapist/thingy's side of the story... I think its done here. Move on to another?


Why dont you make a story when you die instead? It would be a blessing.