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What did you think of the Story?

It was awesome, and scary
53 (48.2%)
It was good, and creepy
34 (30.9%)
It was okay, and odd
12 (10.9%)
It was bad, and nothing
11 (10%)

Total Members Voted: 110

Author Topic: Drive back home (Scary Story) (Ending Done)  (Read 18623 times)

Why dont you make a story when you die instead? It would be a blessing.
Why do you insist on bothering me when I told you to leave me alone? That would be a blessing.

What if you have him wake up in another body or something?

Why dont you make a story when you die instead? It would be a blessing.
Double Toast but....
Obvious troll is Obvious

Why do you insist on bothering me when I told you to leave me alone? That would be a blessing.
Its something I do.

Actually, I have a pretty good part three, maybe ill write it down. The main character in part three is the guys's friend from party btw.
 Its pretty short, I know.

          It was two weeks since the mysterious death of my friend, I was getting dressed for the funeral. I just wish I knew what caused this. From what I saw, this couldn't have been an accident. By the time I got in my car, I was hesitant to turn the ignition key. "Dont be a big baby!" I thought to myself; "Its not like im the next target right?" I was halfway to the funeral when I saw a tall figure in a black cloak. I drove by, not thinking anything of it. At the funeral, (the graveyard is where the funeral is) I noticed the figure again. I wasn't sure who he (or she) was doing here, but I decided to walk (I sprinted, actually) to the funeral. As I was running, I saw the figure again, and again, and again as I ran the most confusing route I could think of. I looked up, and blinked in confusion. I was back at my house! So I got my mini-jet and decided to fly there. As I was flying, I looked back and the thing was holding on to the planes wing! It climbed up, and the last thing I ever saw were glowing red eyes and fangs...


 DUN DUN DUN... DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!!!

Looks like we have our next Michael Crichton here on the Blockland forums.

Loved the ending. It was awesome.

So I got my mini-jet and decided to fly there. As I was flying, I looked back and the thing was holding on to the planes wing! It climbed up, and the last thing I ever saw were glowing red eyes and fangs...

The rest sounded good, but when a mini-jet came, you totally killed it.

The rest sounded good, but when a mini-jet came, you totally killed it.
Mini-jets are very common in Blockland whether it's a fictional story (Like here) or in just common gameplay.

Mini-jets are very common in Blockland whether it's a fictional story (Like here) or in just common gameplay.

Yes but really? In a time where your running at dark being chased by something, you go home and get onto a minijet in no time?
« Last Edit: June 27, 2010, 03:28:05 PM by Dillpickle »

100'th Post.
Had to say that.


     I'm thinking of making another one. And I need some ideas. Anything?

this is blockland. Anything can happen.



     I'm thinking of making another one. And I need some ideas. Anything?
Drive back home 2