I could swear that one at the lake was me! I was staring at the lake wondering what was going on and I heard someone cough. I looked up to see someone holding a camera. I was at the clubhouse and my car had crashed down into that lake years ago. After i wend back over my eyes glowed a decent red. Until the storm cleared up my eyes glowed like that.
Nice story, but in one of the pictures the "thing" looks like you drew a blockhead with Microsoft Paint. I would suggest using bots instead of drawing the monster of choice.