Type 81-1 Assault Rifle (Removed Baretta)

[Uxie]

 I need constructive criticism.This is what I will base it off of. The Machine Gun is now an 81-1 Assult Rifle.

I know the Middle top part isn't complete.

I am having great additions to it. I am working on it having a right click to hit people. Sadly I am having trouble. I can only get it to play the hitting animations.


This is a picture of me holding it from the right side.


This is a picture of my custom bullet. This is for the Machine Gun and the Pistol.


This is a picture of me holding it from the front.


This is a picture of what the gun looks like spawned on a brick. No hands when spawned.


This is a picture of me shooting is in first person with my custom gun shell comming out.


Forget about my Baretta. So many pictures already made and such.

Any ideas of more constructive criticism?

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[ottosparks]

You see.

You went crazy with the blocko concept.

Make it a little less blocko and based off a real gun.

[Uxie]

Err... I didn't base it off a real gun. I just went and made it off of what I know about Machine Guns.

[A Twig]

I love it.

[ottosparks]

The thing wasn't letting me post.


It's good, but it needs something.

A secondary grenade fire. :D

[Uxie]

Oh, It doesn't need to be less blocko? I was adding half a cylander on top and evening  it out with the rest of the Gun.

[GenaralSkar]

It's to boxy.

[TheKhoz]

Looks like crap.

[Uxie]

Way to give Criticism. Constructive.

[Kevin]

Alright the base of your gun is good, but it defininatly needs details.



This is a decent blocko model, Note how it uses octagons and such.Get rid of the black box at the end and add an octagon or hexagon. Also look at real guns and throw in details on them if you want to, its just really bland.

[Splatter U]

This looks fairly love... Keep up the good work mate... I believe you have a future in addons.

[vv45689]

Alright the base of your gun is good, but it defininatly needs details.



This is a decent blocko model, Note how it uses octagons and such.Get rid of the black box at the end and add an octagon or hexagon. Also look at real guns and throw in details on them if you want to, its just really bland.

how do you get that? off that?

[TheKhoz]

how do you get that? off that?

By the way, Kevin didn't make that nor did he claim he did.

[Kevin]

By the way, Kevin didn't make that nor did he claim he did.

Ya just using as an example, Captain crazy made that awsome model.

[spartan101]

Did you use a hand animation for it?,also what modeling program?