Well, apparently I'm not allowed to say anything bad about Pengie's voice, so no comment.
:V joking joking
Also guys if the beginning/all of the song sucks, don't hesitate to say so, I'll have lots of free time over the week-end to make countless theme tunes. The three songs I'm using for my grade 2 (yep) piano test are all from a jazz piano book, so I know what cadences and progressions and harmonies and melodies Etc. Etc. Etc. are generally used. I do think that the key mashing in the beginning is a little too dissonant, though, but thinking about it all the songs I'm learning at the moment do sound a little bit like key-mashing. Anyway my compositions are always criticized heavily, so feel free to carry on the tradition :P.