Star Fox: Four Horsemen - like progress noobs

[Deus Ex]

Yeehaw, ride that bull - with stick!

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[A.R.C.]

Entire thread is carrots.

[Shadowed999]

Well,guess for her a fake member is as good as the real thing...just doesnt have missle deployment systems though.

[Dusty12]

What the forget are you idiots on about.

[Shadowed999]

What the forget are you idiots on about.

oh stuff....

[Shadowed999]

Ummm....well now we need a chapter that takes place a year ahead...with her pregnant....starfox gets shot....he gets revenge.....hes an outlaw and such.

[A.R.C.]

What the forget are you idiots on about.

Just talking about horse carrots.
How do you like your horse carrot, flared or not?

[Dusty12]

How about I stick to my plot involving stealing a tank and tearing through a mutant infested facility, a night off, the final assualt, and a grueling final battle as many secrets are revealed?

[A.R.C.]

All I read was "How about I stick my" and then looked back up at my horse carrot post.

[Qwepir]

I tried to put aside my bias and read this, but I can't. It's not the romance, not your writing, but I just can't stand fanfiction.



also why are they trying to salvage order tech, their engines are worthless and everything else is unremarkable aside from power output

[Shadowed999]

How about I stick to my plot involving stealing a tank and tearing through a mutant infested facility, a night off, the final assualt, and a grueling final battle as many secrets are revealed?

Knew you were gonna say that.I am satisfied now...also you spelled assault wrong...

All I read was "How about I stick my" and then looked back up at my horse carrot post.

[Dusty12]

Qwepir. My Order =/= GSB Order

[Qwepir]

could've sworn I saw "religious zealots" or something similar somewhere being used to describe your order and that was enough for me to make a completely baseless assumption

[Dusty12]

The Order is a fairly generic name for a group of insane religious twats.

[DracoSoul]

Ok so, I'm going to pitch you an ending, hear me out

A dragon kills everyone

I spent all night thinking this up, so make sure you're sure about what to do with it.