Star Fox: Four Horsemen - like progress noobs

[Meekl]

i want reg to draw me a cat avatar now :D

also meekl lied
i slept fine last night

becuase i exploded exposed nigth's plans

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[Dusty12]

Can I get some actual criticism on the story.

[goobler402]

Can I get some actual criticism on the story.

Hmmm, well, I don't know if there is anything wrong with it other than the fact I don't like drama.
It's too good to be criticized?

[Tom Gunn]

Hey you, yeah you.

Your robot is done.

Can I get some actual criticism on the story.

It's cheesy and I would pay to read it.

[goobler402]

Hey you, yeah you.

Your robot is done.

It's cheesy and I would pay to read it.

But I didn't order a robot.

Actually, it wouldn't be worth the money, for once, I agree with ARC.

[A.R.C.]

i wouldn't buy it.

There's just something that rubs me wrong about some of the characters.
And most villains seem a little faceless if you know what I mean, even with this development you've been giving them.
Though most of my 'if with the story might just be the way you describe things.

[Night Fox]

also meekl lied
i slept fine last night

I tooollld you.

[Dusty12]

I meant the story about Mike n' Lucy.

[A.R.C.]

make a story of a story erry day

[goobler402]

I meant the story about Mike n' Lucy.

I didn't like it.
IMO.
I just don't like drama, and love stories.

[Meekl]

[Dusty12]

wat

[Meekl]

wat

hue

[Dusty12]

incoming barbs



barbs
barbs everywhere

[Qwepir]

why is it when you said barb
i thought bee richard