Okay:I think the whole build has a prevailing sense of trying way too hard to be modern. Everything is cramped and the spaces don't really flow because you tried to add so many features into a small abstract house. Make sense?
Can you get a better picture of the outside, like of the entire house? You only really showed the outside of the house in the first picture and it's not the best angle or vantage point. I'll give the interior a 15/17.
Thats pretty good, I'll give it a 9/17