Author Topic: Your Writing Sucks  (Read 13142 times)

I never got around to reading Sue's after I read Star Fox and panties in the same century. I would assume it's good.
wat

Yeah, ok, since you're like totally me and you make that decision. I had Dodger installed in my brain the other day so he can keep track of my mental workings.
yeah pretty much

wat
I heard somebody quote that from your writing, but I guess if you said 'wat' to that, I'll go see for myself.

Dusty is a Star Fox furry. According to King of Losers, she wrote a brief tale of Fox loving Krystal in great, unspeakable detail. And then sent it to King via Steam.

Which explains a few of the comments on my profile

*shudder*

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"F… Fox, this is h… hardly a place for this act." She gasped. He gently carried her over to the bed and kissed her again. Her hands found the clasp of his belt and removed it with ease, next sliding his pants down. He rolled over and sat up, removing his pants fully and his underwear, exposing his member.

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He grasped the waist of her pants and slid them off, taking care to next remove her panties cautiously. He leaned over the foot of the bed and began to lap lovingly at her moist womanhood. She let out a low moan as his tongue penetrated her body, the walls of her vagina pulsating quickly.

My mind is bleeding.

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He pulled her lower body close to his, grabbing hold of his snake and gently pressing it against her vaginal opening. She bit her lip and let out a moan as his member slid into her body, fully penetrating her. He slowly began to pull out, the walls of her vagina trying to pull him back in. He began to pick up speed, pounding her deeper and deeper into the bed with an animalistic ferocity. She shouted several obscenities as Fox continued to penetrate her, her vagina reeling with every retraction. The headboard of the bed began to smack against the wall as Fox's ferocity got faster and harder. She could tell he was very close, and she was right behind him. With one final thrust, Fox sent his seed spilling into her body and she came shortly after.
I kind of do regret reading it, but hopefully I'll forget it soon enough.
« Last Edit: September 22, 2010, 08:50:28 PM by oromis »

There's a more underlining reason for the loveual part(s) of the stories.

There's a more underlining reason for the loveual part(s) of the stories.

Yeah, it's sue's bottled up loveual desires.

FURRIES love

CANNOT PROCESS

There's a more underlining reason for the loveual part(s) of the stories.
Furry
Just because there is a story to go along with furryforget doesn't make it good furryforget.

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Oh god I think that's it

I wonder if Dusty still denies being a furry

People obviously don't realize they're only going to get negative comments.
i got a good comment from the one person i've showed it to so far :I

Yeah, it's sue's bottled up loveual desires.
More than that.

Oh god I think that's it

I wonder if Dusty still denies being a furry
Do you still deny beating off to yoshi research?

Do you still deny beating off to yoshi research?
I don't write creepy love stories.
Dusty, on the other hand-

Well, read the above posts

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 I'm in grade 7 english and I can tell you without a shadow of a doubt that my writing is better than yours, judging from what you post. You have the right write it, but frankly it sucks, so please don't post it in creativity.


Seventh grade?